Coleon vs. Class

[classthe_king]

8 lines
normal rules
Due in 30

[classthe_king]

Your "cravin" a victory but that only means your flow's coward
Im about to end this west va hill billy rappin moe howard
Your overpowered by this and im takin you out one way
After this, your battle career will be "weakend" like saturday and sunday
Ill take your pathetic verse and spit it back at you with dignity,
Turn the boo's to aplause and high five the statue of liberty
Shut the fuck up bitch I ain't even contemplain with you
ive won, you lost like if you tried to have a conversation with zu

I tried my best

I just wanted one win but i know Coleon is probably goona smash me

[classthe_king]

you can just post both over there if you want. The only personal i left was the first line so explaning doesnt really matter

[Relapse.LP]

Coleon took this easily, not going to bother breaking it down, because to be honest, he took every category. Punches were relatively weak compared to some of Cole's, but it was overall the better verse.

1-0.

EDIT: Class's wordplay with "weekend" was pretty good, but the Saturday and Sunday part could be elaborated slightly in greater depth to find other openings to attack Coleon, instead of just statements.

[classthe_king]

yeah, i deff see what your saying

[Le Tunisien]

Flow: Class
Personals: Class -
Punchlines: Coleon
Wordplay: Class (weekend )
Nameplay: Coleon
Complexity: Coleon
Rhymes: Class
Multies: Class

wich means my votes for class

[Just Silver]

Coleon took it i feel personals and word play are the biggest things in a battle
especially in a forum

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

Coleon wins.

How would I get into one of these battles?

[classthe_king]

I got a vote Great verse coleon

[Spyder]

omg Coleon that was delicous
vote Col if it aint over

Class, i see you took my Apothecary advice

[Slim Zaddy]

i guess i was too late,,, but ,, good battle form class, but ya cole came harder,,,,,,,,,, but calss you can do a lot better ,, you're sick at writin,, just get ya heard straight up bro ,