Letter To Tamara

[MC Anonymous]

Hello there Tamara, how you doing, how you be?
How many people you see, inside of heaven's scene?
Who's there with you? Have you seen my mom once?
She died and came back to life like God's son
although you've been gone for about a couple years
I've known you since your body even appeared
and ever since you left me, been kinda edgy
losing a family member hurts, hun you best be
safe in those heaven gates, with heaven traits
cause being born disfigured is worse then eleven stakes
So even though your gone, and dead, your alive
inside my rhymes, my spirit and my time
The pain that I feel, I know I shouldn't feel
cause your alive in my heart, and by heaven I will

Hold your memories, inside my heart
as long as I have the pen, your life will spark
You were born to die, from a tortured life
Your spirit lives on, in all my life x2

Every day when you were conceived, I held the belly
standing next to my Mom, and well it's funny
'cause I never even knew you, but I loved you
different type of feeling when one's above you
Mom was stressed, you had trisomy 13
I didn't understand it, I was a hurt teen
My Mom went crazy, she knew you was gone
before you were even born, dead in her palms
the loss was critical, she lost her mind
at the cost of my life, and a cost of time
Losing an existence as pretty as you
is the same as losing a love, the pity is true
I can never forgive your father, cause he's dumb
cause he didn't even cry, he didn't clench his gums
this is my letter to you, I hope you read it
when I die you can open my heart and see it

Hold your memories, inside my heart
as long as I have the pen, your life will spark
You were born to die, from a tortured life
Your spirit lives on, in all my life x2

[AliJack]

Very deep man. Even without the audio I feel the emotion in this piece. You have my deepest condolences, I hope you don't feel too bad about your sister.

[Wic Kid]

Deep, man. The most emotional song I've read so far in CW. Flow was kinda meh (just in my head), but everything else was alrite. Lack of multies, but it'd be pretty dumb to put lotta multies in there, so thats good. Chorus was the best part. If this is based on true events, Im sorry for your loss.

Overall, great piece.

[Fa-Q]

Very powerful...I struggle with worrying about multis and get caught up in doing crazy multis when its songs like this that remind me that it really doesn't matter. Well anyway this is a great song, very good message and imagery....bravo mister annon

[BILI]

Wow man that was dope piece,really touched me

[Emadyville]

Very good, it flowed perfectly with how I read it, great piece, I like you writing this style

[classthe_king]

Dang, this was dope I like how you didn't fill it with internals and you just had the rhyme at the end. Made it flow better

[macdaddy019967]

thats was some emotional powerful interesting shit right there

[Arabian Shady]

aiyo, you allready know how i feel on this 1 man, that was wiked

[gutawafang]

looking forward to listen to it, especially the chorus man. Nice emotional piece.

[Yah-hah]

Yo wat up homie. I really felt this piece man. Real emotional shit mna mad props. Very easy to follw flow to it. Loved it big homie keep that head up man