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all eyes on me keystyle

Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 16th, '09, 17:37

where am I going with this why don't you Tell Me
I ain't got a fucking ride, a bitch or a Celly
nope I'm broke so to this world I ain't No Good
I'm feel like a fisherman cuz I'm ready to Throw Hooks
depressed cuz this stress is eating me Alive
there's no place Ta Hide and no Upside
so I write down a couple Rhymes and Chill
some might say I got too much Time ta Kill
my Mind is Ill but no one offers a Little Help
tell me what's next after you Live Though Hell
I never hear any anwers cuz I'm always Alone
a life of solitude is all I've ever Known
it's not the best but it's gonna Have ta Work
let my enemies know their all getting Massacred

all eyes on me they know I ain't going anywhere
do you want war cuz I'm prepared to take it there
motherfucker I'm the one that they try to See
don't you dare look away I want all eyes on me
all eyes on me they know I ain't going anywhere
do you want war cuz I'm prepared to take it there
motherfucker I'm the one that they try to See
don't you dare look away I want all eyes on me

everyday I wake up and hunt for a Job
but I stay unemployed and locked in my Thoughts
I don't have much and I don't pretend to Either
don't believe me then do a little Research
that's what it's like living in a Small Town
so I write up some lyrics ready to go All Out
it never seems to Change this is a life a Pain
people talk around it but it still Remains the Same
I'm single so my friends say I ain't got no Game
but how can that be when I grab a mic and make it Rain
regardless of anybody's Claims I'm not in it for the Fame
they may seem Insane but I'll keep rapping to I'm Slain
for not giving in to pressure and dissing the Media
spending my last dime on pot like I Need These Buds
sitting at my desk stoned thinking that life ain't Fair
laughing to myself like it's funny cuz I really don't Care

all eyes on me they know I ain't going anywhere
do you want war cuz I'm prepared to take it there
motherfucker I'm the one that they try to See
don't you dare look away I want all eyes on me
all eyes on me they know I ain't going anywhere
do you want war cuz I'm prepared to take it there
motherfucker I'm the one that they try to See
don't you dare look away I want all eyes on me
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Re: all eyes on me keystyle

Postby BILI » Nov 16th, '09, 17:43

Its good :y: ,some good rhymes,some simple,few good muties :y: ,it flowed really good 2,first verse was a bit better then second,and I like the hook 2 :y: ,so overall nice piece
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Re: all eyes on me keystyle

Postby D'Leh » Nov 16th, '09, 17:49

nice drop, flowed very well sometimes, but the rhymes we're dope!!!
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Re: all eyes on me keystyle

Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 16th, '09, 18:23

thanks for the feed I was bored and needed to do something and rhymes are what I do
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Re: all eyes on me keystyle

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 16th, '09, 18:56

Crazy dope man. Nice multies throughout. Sick bro
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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