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Get away from myself

Postby Just Silver » Nov 15th, '09, 19:52

Battlefield olympics tossing torpedoes
my bad for your linguistics size of mosquitoes
cuz i will take what "he" wrote, turn it to the last thing "she" spoke. (1)
..i stay testing mics but have "ADD" and "mine-is" what i like, (2)
recite then rewrite, a whole lot of racing thoughts
police ight, cant see "write" or even try to "trace" my thoughts
so we back at a crime scene, a new dead teen in some blue jeans
a cup of cough syrup that made his world congested
but to him his sickness was what he was best at,
ass burgers, i mean aspergers soundings of this word, made a fast doomed curse(3)
with social occasions and gatherings, postal days were happenings with salaries,
where he could just savor his meager paper, to later ignore him, like habeas corpus(4)
you get a "red hood" if you start saving your porridge, so away with to the forage
to hide from importance, and rise from our corpses, of little concourses(5)

tried a little different approach
Something small -Keystyle-
MEANINGS
1.turn him into a bitch
2.add as in addition mine-is is minus
3.aspergers is a social disorder often pronounced wrong
4.being ignored as the own government has
5.Concourses are where pathways meet Little concourses would mean small decisions
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Re: Get away from myself

Postby Just Silver » Nov 16th, '09, 18:09

bump :sweating:
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Re: Get away from myself

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 16th, '09, 18:51

Yo man every drop you get better and better. Good shit man nice wordplay and rhyme scheme. Keep workin homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Get away from myself

Postby Just Silver » Nov 16th, '09, 20:55

Yah-hah wrote:Yo man every drop you get better and better. Good shit man nice wordplay and rhyme scheme. Keep workin homie

good looks for the feed hoping to be able to be even better
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Re: Get away from myself

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 16th, '09, 21:10

I'm jealous of your punches....good drop
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Re: Get away from myself

Postby Just Silver » Nov 16th, '09, 21:19

i want to be a recognizable freshman lol
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