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Dream Machine

Postby D'Leh » Nov 16th, '09, 17:50

pupils the size of dimes
I‘m stuck in a hole I cant climb
What the fucks goin on, im out of my mind
bright lights in my rear view
lookin red white and blue but I cant get a clear view
Someone shining a light in on me who Is this dude
Seems kinda rude to try n blind someone
Bout to transform the whip n flyin into the sun
What the fuck is he doing this dude gotta gun
I gotta run, im mashin the gas but the car seems stuck in the past
I don’t know how to unwrap the present
damn sure aint goin back to the future
Remember my 5th grade tooter mrs beuller
The way she smacked my ass with that ruler
Im glad I wasn’t just another ferris
What the fucks goin on am I trippin
what were those hills I was sniffin
What was that green shit I was rippin
I know these aren’t the effects from the patrone I was sippin
Maybe I should take my shovel and dig deeper
This dude right behind me is straight creeper
Why did I grow up to be such a fuckin under achiever
My hearts pounding I need a fuckin breather
I wonder if this dudes just the grim reaper
I just realized the laces are untied on my sneaker
Wait there goes the palace of ceaser
I wonder if there an open room
Where did I put my broom I need to fly away
Oh wait my minds already flown away from that J
Well hey, worst comes to worst ill just eat some curds and whey
Inject myself with meth till im on cloud nine with my lunch tray
This dude still behind me hes really wastin his time
Oh look at the time its quarter till 9
Since when did they make tie dye stop signs
my gas is seepin, my foots on the pedal sleepin
Why is my car constantly fuckin beepin
Oh wait its just my alarm clock…. im fuckin dreamin.
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Dream Machine

Postby BILI » Nov 16th, '09, 18:03

I like the whole concept,nice idea :y: ,some good rhymes 2 :y: ,it flowed well,good stuff man,you improved a lot since you came to this site :y: :worship:
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Re: Dream Machine

Postby D'Leh » Nov 16th, '09, 18:12

BILI wrote:I like the whole concept,nice idea :y: ,some good rhymes 2 :y: ,it flowed well,good stuff man,you improved a lot since you came to this site :y: :worship:



yes, and i try to do good, ha ha thanks BIILIMAN, we had a collab on the air..
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Re: Dream Machine

Postby BILI » Nov 16th, '09, 18:28

D'Leh wrote:
BILI wrote:I like the whole concept,nice idea :y: ,some good rhymes 2 :y: ,it flowed well,good stuff man,you improved a lot since you came to this site :y: :worship:



yes, and i try to do good, ha ha thanks BIILIMAN, we had a collab on the air..

we can do a new one ;)
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Re: Dream Machine

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 16th, '09, 20:18

Unwrap the present...dope, dope piece
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Re: Dream Machine

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 17th, '09, 18:08

Diggin it D really am. Concept it tight, flow was different but I got it. Keep knockin them things out bro
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Dream Machine

Postby D'Leh » Nov 17th, '09, 19:42

Yah-hah wrote:Diggin it D really am. Concept it tight, flow was different but I got it. Keep knockin them things out bro

THANKS YAH!!! CHEK OUT MY NEW ONE THE VOICES FEAT. RX
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