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Summon

Postby gutawafang » Nov 19th, '09, 08:25

Search a poem, change the words, to the point you think it's mine
In misbelief, you mis-believe, no diss or beef, I sing this rhyme
Call for backup, I'm your enemy, forget me, condemn me
Fuck strategy, it's just me, with pesticide you can stomp me
Cuz it's like a war but just a game, I send out my troops
Send out my tanks, my trucks, and then I claim my loot
Ifrit for the fire, Shiva for the fucking icy blast
I'm fiery like the fireplace, cold like a jerky-ass
It irks me, yes, how your stand changes like the seasons
Your mood swings, you cry and scream for no reasons
Like Bahamut screams, shockwavy blast from the Griever
You're a high damage boss fight, bitch you just a Retriever
There's no exit, so I accept it, I most expect it
With acid, you rancid, I guessed it, you enact it
But what do I demand for in this rhyme for some dang bithces?
I'ma flip the bird and express it in different languages
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Re: Summon

Postby gutawafang » Nov 20th, '09, 06:56

testing.
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Re: Summon

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 20th, '09, 07:09

Search a poem, change the words, to the point you think it's mineIn misbelief, you mis-believe, no diss or beef, I sing this rhyme

Favorite lines...I like when you do more multis....but good job
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Re: Summon

Postby gutawafang » Nov 20th, '09, 07:16

Fa-Q wrote:Search a poem, change the words, to the point you think it's mineIn misbelief, you mis-believe, no diss or beef, I sing this rhyme

Favorite lines...I like when you do more multis....but good job

ok man. I'll do more multis. Thanks a lot for checking homie. ;)
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Re: Summon

Postby Tash8 » Nov 20th, '09, 14:52

no joke but after eminem put relapse out with all those complex multis, everyone here has been trying to up their multi game and they have done so well..

goood job on that, i couldn't help but think of call of duty or something when i read your verse, seemed like a video game haha, no joke but ur imagery was good...but there really was no point to the verse.
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Re: Summon

Postby gutawafang » Nov 21st, '09, 05:15

Tash8 wrote:no joke but after eminem put relapse out with all those complex multis, everyone here has been trying to up their multi game and they have done so well..

goood job on that, i couldn't help but think of call of duty or something when i read your verse, seemed like a video game haha, no joke but ur imagery was good...but there really was no point to the verse.

thank you man for your opinions. much appreciated. :)
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