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Fifteen Point Fiv3(Luther Large)

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Fifteen Point Fiv3(Luther Large)

Postby Just Silver » Nov 20th, '09, 00:36

From the systems prison to the freedom of streets/
i let it be known by talkin to jesus through my personal priest/
and emerge from the filth fully bathed and unscathed by the streets/
lethal evils i've managed kept my distance from a peaceful appearance/
hopefully i'll soon earn some respect for my perserverance/
protected with the usual guns and gaurded with knives/
i'm never unjustly although murder is a crucial part of my life/
i used to earn profit anyway possible keepin from broke/
while my mind was vined with coke seeds and weed smoke/
surrounded by poverty and my mind still seems to be rich/
but in the end that can't get me wealth so my body still sins/
it seems as if religion is outdated/
cuz the only laws and restrictions i followed i created/


exploded like propane with profane names helped to (but in a way also hurted to) mold my brain/
a thousand dollars astonished (astounded) the (my) foundin fathers/
while my friends slangin the basics/ aimin to get his cake up/
bakin there base while racin to get there papes up/
but i cant do no time cuz i'm already doin it/
i snatch the heart of an ace and club it to death/
fuckin with cocaine and conductin the soul train/

Yo you aint real u just run at the mouth why?/
the only heat u blast is when it's freezin outside/
ya'll need to give it up and quit fakin the funk/
just stop rappin only thing you spittin is dunce/
sendin a mixed message to youth fuckin there brains up/
the ignorances got'em callin all women bitches/
the message is wicked/
were all blessed with a vision/
but when that vision is blurred son the profession is twisted/
so wise up and dont blame shit on who the president is/
if u havent made an effort and tried to change the life of are kids/

More of my cousins stuff
what do u guys think His user name was Luther Large so you understand why it says that.
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Re: Fifteen Point Fiv3(Luther Large)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 20th, '09, 03:58

Crazy verse. I really feel your style and your vocabulary usage is rather impressive as well. A refreshing break from the usual stuff in this thread. :y: :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Fifteen Point Fiv3(Luther Large)

Postby Just Silver » Nov 20th, '09, 04:10

da.relapse.lp wrote:Crazy verse. I really feel your style and your vocabulary usage is rather impressive as well. A refreshing break from the usual stuff in this thread. :y: :y:

its my cousins stuff lol
havent got around to just type up
feeling like shit so posted some of my cousins old stuff might post some more
wanted feed beacuse of the style difference from him
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