Till Death We Are Apart

[Fa-Q]

I liked it.....very descriptive are you a writer cause I am too

[Fa-Q]

Please change the title to regular lettering tho....please it foreal hurts my eyes

[gutawafang]

Wow. triple post is the shit.

I think it's because we all have to click on the link, that's why people don't bother. LOL.

Ok, I've read it. Here's the feed. I hope you don't mind me sounding harsh or anything.

I think your friend here SPAMS lots of vocab. It's both a good thing and a bad thing. It's good because it shows how good your friend's vocab is. It's bad cuz some words are redundant.

The thing I liked about this story is that it makes me imagine the shits. That's where the vocab helps a lot.

Some sentences are random, kinda like out of nowhere. No transitions and shits.

It's quite interesting cuz I like fictions like this. Kinda like fantasy thingy.