Another Song About Bre

[Fa-Q]

If my heart has a song, then she sings mine,
Everyday she brings a line,
And when its winter, she's my springtime,
What if I carve her name in a tree,
Next to mine in a heart,
Would she want the same for me,
What if we had time apart,
I'm wonderin where to put,
The thought that for you,
I would walk a thousand miles barefoot,
My heart is full, cause Bre is there,
Around you a beat is rare,
I feel insignificant, with the heat of your stair,
I just felt your face, and I melted in place,
I see that beauty mark on your right cheek,
Fight to speak,
But I can't be responsible for the poetry that might leak,



I know these words hurt,
But I also know, I don't deserve her,
Thinking of her, today will be my last day,
All my memories of her past away,
Even though in my mind, they asked to stay,
When I met her, my heart was full and new,
Now its been trampled, like the sole of a shoe,
I'm desolate, lost without a cause,
Alone, all I think about are my flaws,
I look deep into your eyes,
And my inner core cries,
While her strong spirit, soars in skies,
I'm stuck trying to fly, but I only crash,
I was a burning candle, but now I'm lonely ash,



Knowing she's with someone else, makes me start to weep,
Then when I'm around her,
Up again starts my heart beat,
My head is full, of thoughts of her,
So I write and now my lead is dull,
When I'm around her, I feel nothing less than incredible,
I feel high on top of a pedistal,
Even her imperfections are perfect,
Around her my words get,
jumbled and still nothings occured yet,
And even if I have to stair at her profile,
Even if its a thousand jokes, all I want is a slow smile,
Sometimes I look in her eyes,
Shook and surprised,
That she would even look back,
(Even look back)

[DƎRDYPK]

fucking aYe bro that shit makes me wanna cry...
I feel the same way about a girl but she's with someone else
anyway..this was really deep..my favorite parts were

If my heart has a song, then she sings mine,
Everyday she brings a line,
And when its winter, she's my springtime,

I know these words hurt,
But I also know, I don't deserve her,
Thinking of her, today will be my last day,
All my memories of her past away,
Even though in my mind, they asked to stay,
When I met her, my heart was full and new,
Now its been trampled, like the sole of a shoe,

that's the kinda stuff that makes me wanna break down start crying & headbutting walls
this was very nice man

[Yah-hah]

^The two he said are sick. Beautiful stuff big homie.

[Fa-Q]

^The two he said are sick. Beautiful stuff big homie.

That's Mister Big Homie to you sir and thanks Derdy

[Fa-Q]

Idk if I should have a chorus for this one or not

[eminemgirl1234]

Awww! That is so sad! Omigod! I'm crying right now. Omigod! So sweet. You ever told her how you feel? and also, were you guys friends before the dude took her away from you?

[Fa-Q]

:'( Awww! That is so sad! Omigod! I'm crying right now. Omigod! So sweet. You ever told her how you feel? and also, were you guys friends before the dude took her away from you?

Well she came to my school and she was with him and yea were friends....sorry for making you cry lol

[eminemgirl1234]

:'( Awww! That is so sad! Omigod! I'm crying right now. Omigod! So sweet. You ever told her how you feel? and also, were you guys friends before the dude took her away from you?

Well she came to my school and she was with him and yea were friends....sorry for making you cry lol

What did you do?! Shit, If Marshall came to My school, with a chick on his arm, We would be fighting! I'll be fighting him and the chick! Shit! Sorry.

[Fa-Q]

:'( Awww! That is so sad! Omigod! I'm crying right now. Omigod! So sweet. You ever told her how you feel? and also, were you guys friends before the dude took her away from you?

Well she came to my school and she was with him and yea were friends....sorry for making you cry lol

What did you do?! Shit, If Marshall came to My school, with a chick on his arm, We would be fighting! I'll be fighting him and the chick! Shit! Sorry.

Haha well I'm happy to report my giving her one of the songs Monday

[eminemgirl1234]

^EEEEEK! I WONDER WHAT SHE'S GONNA SAY! OMIGOD! EEEEK! I WANNA KNOW EVERYTHING! OKAY? I WANNA KNOW EVERYTHING! PM ME THE DETS, ALRIGHT?

[Fa-Q]

^EEEEEK! I WONDER WHAT SHE'S GONNA SAY! OMIGOD! EEEEK! I WANNA KNOW EVERYTHING! OKAY? I WANNA KNOW EVERYTHING! PM ME THE DETS, ALRIGHT?

Haha ok chicka

[mcZu]

After reading the last line, I felt some chills running up my spine. I think that's all that needs to be said, I won't go indepth about complexity and such.

It had an impact on me, so to me, it's fucking great poetry.

[Fa-Q]

Wow...thanks Zu means alot

[mcZu]

No problem, man. I'm just being straight up, you did a great job.

[Yah-hah]

Yeah agree with Zu. Yeah man wanna know how that goes