song i started, and then got bored of

[mcZu]

Reminds me of Ludcris' Runaway Love.

That said, it's not bad. Flow is kinda shaky in the first verse, second verse flows good, though. Content is dope, and the multies are dope as well. Rhyming could be a lil' better, but, hey, I'm just looking for something to complaint here, lol, otherwise the feed won't be feed, if ya know what I'm saying.

Chorus, well, I guess it should be sang, right? I kinda like it, depends on the singers skill, lol.

Overall, not a bad song, I would say, finish it.

[Fa-Q]

I thought about doing a song about this about a hooker or something lol but that would be corny as fuck coming from me...anyway good stuff, I love scriptive songs and good emotional lyrics....flowed good goodjob

Ps. In what way did you get bored with this

[Slim Zaddy]

nice shit man , i liked,, it ,, full of emotions ,, u got some good lines,, hook is great ,, keep it up

[Fa-Q]

I thought about doing a song about this about a hooker or something lol but that would be corny as fuck coming from me...anyway good stuff, I love scriptive songs and good emotional lyrics....flowed good goodjob

Ps. In what way did you get bored with this

like, i don't do songs bit by bit, (almost) every song i do is done in one straight sprint. n with this one i jus got bored of writing, i have sooooo many half written songs that i never go back to

Wow I'm the exact opposite....I write it little by little until I have 60 bars