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Oh My God

Postby mcZu » Nov 22nd, '09, 19:29

I'm currently floating in a writers block dimension, however, after hearing that Jay-Z Oh My God beat, I just had to write something.

The beat used; HERE.

It’s evident, no need for evidence
That I’m better than
Better and
I’ll just say ‘abadan’
Which is Arabic for never, man
Aramaic Sanskrit
Demanding penmanship
A one man war ship
Kicking it high like a choir or the Opera
My advice to you is to opt to
Just stop talking like Oprah
I’m operating within like temptation
Wining with ten exclamations
So I excel above ten nations
And on occasions when I’m in the booth I must
Go from the top off the head ‘cause I’m ruth-less
Zu is like lust here, so
I keep going on like an infinite ergo
I’m in an indefinite infinity with my ego
I’m like a hired hieroglyphic expert
With experts from ex Persia treasures
Purposely pressured
To present y’all answers
That end the slur
With even more questions, sure
I’m on a quest to question
The best in
This world with my text and
I wont stop testing
Until y’all kneel before the sandking
‘cause I’ve in my hand a pen
And that pen is dope and able
Like Cain and his brother
To bother y’all while I enable
My lyrics with a diss that’s able
To disable the stand like a broken table
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

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Re: Oh My God

Postby Requiem » Nov 22nd, '09, 19:30

sick man :y:

fav line "i'm operating within like temptation" Dope as fuuuck :worship:
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Re: Oh My God

Postby mcZu » Nov 22nd, '09, 20:17

Requiem wrote:sick man :y:

fav line "i'm operating within like temptation" Dope as fuuuck :worship:


Scott M wrote:really good, i liked this. the short lines enabled me to flow to it easy (i didn't use the beat btw) so i'm impressed. nice one zu :y: i liked the first few lines best, especially the use of the arabic word.

Thanks Requiem and Scotty, 'preciate it guys.
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