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FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt.4

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FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt.4

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 24th, '09, 03:50

So I'm screaming FUCK THE WORLD on one last page,
Engauge the gauge I use to insue my rage,
Wait now it's getting crazy I'm just screamin for no reason,
Like my dome's leaking my brains gone with no bleedin,
I'm soul seekin so I set my missle to heat-seekin,
I keep reachin cause three weeks in I'm still knee-deep in my seaweed skin,
These weekends seem to be more than 72 hours,
With my heavy-as-you doubters
And I'm ready to shoot ours,
Fill my heavenly due shower with 72 flowers,
I'm ready with new power to smash the Fuck out of this place,
Depressions the only lesson I learn when I crashed in the 1st race,
In Earth days my winter lasts 361,
This weekends leavin me and it wasn't a pretty one,
So that's three days gone when I left off to Jupiter,
I left watch so you'd get hurt when I crept off with Lucifer,

Fuck the world with every ounce of spirit in my chest,
To clear it for the best you'd have to hear it in the flesh,
Just to feel it in my soul I let my spirit unfold,
Fuck this whole world is the only story that I'm told

I'm trying to find a balance in this fucked nation,
With my fucked placement in this shut basement,
I'm Fucked face it I hate this God damn place so I yell in anger,
I got 6 bullets in 6 chambers I'm 6 strangers from gettin my evict papers,
I scream with my fist clenched,
I fiend with my list hence my wish is witnessed as fiction,
This witch and her lover can see both barrels of my thunder,
So careless in my hunger Unaware of the covered shutter above my brother,
Even my mother is concerned I'll be back to my old ways,
Shootin up herion on the corner block rocked by these cold days,
There's no way I'll go back to those bad parts,
My souls black parts covered in track marks,
I lack smarts but I pack heart it lies next to my bullets,
Foolish when these bullies fool me then I pull it,
I'll take this gun to my head and pull the trigger screaming,
In this winter season I stay inner dreamin,
Cause my inards are just dinner for the bigger demons,

Fuck the world with every ounce of spirit in my chest,
To clear it for the best you'd have to hear it in the flesh,
Just to feel it in my soul I let my spirit unfold,
Fuck this whole world is the only story that I'm told

I'm stuck to my seat screamin I think I'm loosin it reading this Jewish lit.,
Had the shit kicked out of me so much I think my screws are loose a bit,
I'm usin it yeah but these nails restrict my hands from doin it,
It's writing useless shit cause my crucifix is loose a bit,
Who's the bitch? I'm just trying to settle in your life shit,
Attempting to fit your 2 foot door but my cross is 4 by 6,
Ignore my shit who the fuck cares I'm screamin just to scream,
Rhymin just to ryhme, thinkin just to think,
They want violence then hell I have plenty left over-charging,
I'm not sober, or sorry for that fucking 4 day coma charlie,
And it's not over, hardly like I was cobra-charming
I just needed a break for the knuckle swell,
This whole world's fucked to hell So I stay fucked aswell,
I can't stop myself from dreaming about the faggots demeaning statements,
The baddest of evil's hatred is in fact a savage eagle Native with a habit of smashin people's face in,
Now I'm on my 2nd try stressed am I, needs a break to rest his eyes,
Only 4 letters (F.U.C.K) written during 4 letters Don't stress this guy,
I wrote more but I lost the 5th like the police forced me to testify.

The last in this series. Alot of fucked up thoughts I put out of these cause they were really not who I am. But for all those who peeped it man I appreciate it.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt.4

Postby gutawafang » Nov 24th, '09, 03:57

I read it twice. It's FIRE. All four is fire. Worth reading again man. :worship: :worship: :worship:

Keep this up. :y:
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt.4

Postby Just Silver » Nov 24th, '09, 04:05

i think this one was my favorite
couldnt pick a favorite line this time lol

liked the way you worked with the multis in this one especially
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt.4

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 24th, '09, 04:34

What did I tell you? :)

Dope drop. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt.4

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 24th, '09, 13:06

:o damn Jus where you pulling this shit from (shit in a good way...please dont put me in a coma) lol
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt.4

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 24th, '09, 14:33

i loved this more man ,, all parts are crazy :o ....... you definitely on my favorite list. keep going man
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt.4

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 24th, '09, 18:16

Thanks all. Yeah I see you relapse. lol Fa-Q. Yo go feed the previous ones if you havent. Appreciate the love
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt.4

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 25th, '09, 18:44

Bump :sweating:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt.4

Postby BILI » Nov 29th, '09, 20:13

Best in "Fuck The World" series,dope drop :y: ,everything rhymes,multies,flow....I just love the whole concept of these drops.
Every Fuck The World is dope :y: :y: :worship:
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt.4

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 29th, '09, 20:18

BILI wrote:Best in "Fuck The World" series,dope drop :y: ,everything rhymes,multies,flow....I just love the whole concept of these drops.
Every Fuck The World is dope :y: :y: :worship:


Thanks BILI. I put everythin I had at that point into that last verse for sure. Think that last one was one of my best ever. Good lookin out big homie
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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