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FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt 1

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 20th, '09, 21:26

Was pissed off at some stuff and wrote 6 pages. This is the first little bit

Now we're taking a break we need some more space,
It's your race so slap my mouth till I have no more taste,
No more brakes so now my cars is hydroplaning,
Hit the nitro baby to send this pyro flaming,
Fine stone changing till my time zone's straining,
My own training keeps the skies from raining,
But I'm done blaming you, not done blaming myself though,
I run flaming in hell's show cause I'm done training for help so,
Oh well it doesn't matter so I scream "FUCK THE WORLD",
Writin, diggin for diamonds but I'm stuck with pearls,
Sluts, no girls Just skins with no meaning,
There's no dreamin a house with no screamin,
No peeking stop it theres no cheating,
There no bleeding until now, turn around its time for yo beating,

Fuck the world with every ounce of spirit in my chest,
To clear it for the best you'd have to hear it in the flesh,
Just to feel it in my soul I let my spirit unfold,
Fuck this whole world is the only story that I'm told

Hell Fuck it all just give me another case of liquor,
They stand straight and slither like snakes and lizards as they escape the river,
Payments differ when the better weather changes quicker,
I’m writing the words plain and simpler as if it rained in winter,
In my brain they flicker when they enter like a splinter trying to obtain it quicker,
I blame the sinner because he changed the picture when he blamed the scripture,
I aim it quicker till the blood of sinners run the river cause my gun is bigger,
I sung whispers that made the sun quiver and everyone shiver,
My super troopers bazooka gun trigger not even the sun’s bigger,
I was quicker till my tongue enters the drums center,
I was thinner until dinner was given to the dinosaurs,

I cry for more and I try to soar but my wings seem to glide no more,
I hide behind your door playing peek-a-boo,
I keep saying me and you need to stop and speak the truth,
I’d stop and speak to you but your too weak to seek what’s new,
I’m wearing red walking the streets of blue don’t seem to see a clue

Fuck the world with every ounce of spirit in my chest,
To clear it for the best you'd have to hear it in the flesh,
Just to feel it in my soul I let my spirit unfold,
Fuck this whole world is the only story that I'm told

I cuss and swear at the beginning of every verse,
Of every curse my fist is clenched for the ending of every word,
Of every obserd nerd whose heard of rap,
And says hip-hops alive but my words are wack,
But classifies that rap has died and actualize my raps as lies,
In fact I tried not to act so ascinine but in fact I wrapped guys in the black lines of my trapped mind till it capsized,
I'm trapped guys, won't somebody come get me?
Won't somebody come lift me before I die, come quickly,
I'm shifty I'm shady I'm empty I'm lazy,
I'm dizzy I'm crazy come give me my ratings,
Just classify me as the guy with mulits,
The guys whose holding the dope fiends from closing the whole thing,
My lines just disappear like coke strings from the coat strings on dope fiends,
Wait haven't I used that bar, I'm almost positive I did,
Yeah but that was before the last shot I almost lost it I did,
Oh so now he's just talking to himself and writing it all like a recital,
Oh great now I have to write'my conscience' featured on the title,
I'm a creature from the Bible just call me Leviathin,
Run so fast you can't follow me so call me the diet plan,
My fingers hurt my knuckles crack and even my hands break,
The land shakes when man takes the fan base of the words that my hands make.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt 1

Postby Just Silver » Nov 20th, '09, 22:17

DAMN :o you just keep going great hustle
staying with multis
Love to see what the rest are like this makes me want more

line of choice:"In fact I tried not to act so ascinine but in fact I wrapped guys in the black lines of my trapped mind"
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt 1

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 20th, '09, 23:00

No more brakes so now my cars is hydroplaning,Hit the nitro baby to send this pyro flaming,

Best line....who or what is this about man alotta emotion
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt 1

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 21st, '09, 17:04

Just alot of things are kinda gettin to me lately so I sat down and just wrote for like 4 hours straight. Felt like I was practically just turning pages. Got alot to put on here so keep your eyes out for it. Appreciate it homies
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt 1

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 22nd, '09, 19:52

Fa-Q wrote:No more brakes so now my cars is hydroplaning,Hit the nitro baby to send this pyro flaming,

Best line....who or what is this about man alotta emotion


Yeah that was one of those lines I've had for awhile but couldnt figure out where to put it at
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt 1

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 25th, '09, 18:41

Bump :sweating: Bumpin whole series not very many views :'(
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt 1

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 27th, '09, 07:58

Damn man two people :'(
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt 1

Postby BILI » Nov 29th, '09, 19:58

Man this was dope as usual,I loved 1st verse most,flow was good,rhymes were dope as always,nice drop :y: :y:
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt 1

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 29th, '09, 19:59

BILI wrote:Man this was dope as usual,I loved 1st verse most,flow was good,rhymes were dope as always,nice drop :y: :y:


Thanks homie. CHeck out the other 3 man
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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