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FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt3

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 24th, '09, 01:51

Fuck the world till it spins on a broken axis,
Wait thats not mine it's just spit with open passion,
That I wrote in action so now I'm just quotin that shit,
Like a tape recorder I was raped in order by nova scoatian disasters,
Shit even my past hurts but I'm steady steppin forward,
Screaming "FUCK THIS WHOLE WORLD" like I was already stressing four words,
But hey it's your curse just to even know me,
To see me be so lonely hoping only you would hold me,
But only the homies even fucking know,
Cause to you I'm just the phony homie at least thats what they told me,
But Fuck it I'm cussin like there aint no tomorrow,
Hell without this paper there aint no words for sorrow,
even if they're borrowed I'm still up to my knees in debt,
I'm still weak in regret to see how she was streesed,
I guess it's no longer a problem like there's no prolonging a father,
But I was born a true-form martyr in luke-warm water,

Fuck the world with every ounce of spirit in my chest,
To clear it for the best you'd have to hear it in the flesh,
Just to feel it in my soul I let my spirit unfold,
Fuck this whole world is the only story that I'm told

My lifestyle requires me to live unselfish,
But I was that way to begin with,
And no matter how much I insist it,
It seems my forgivness is endless,
So I give into the inches of senses that witness the business of quittin,
This God damn restirction with your broke flow and a brake to caller her "bitch"
Until my confidence disappeared like an Oklahoma State scholarship,
Honors? shit I'm only an honest person,
I've lost on purpose begins onkly my problems worsen,
So I stand outside cursin like wats my sin side's choice,
Screamin outside using my "inside" voice,
While my pen glides silently I'm inside rhyming see,
My penstyle's been wild before the inside crime is seen,
I've been in this gutter cause I'm slow and strong,
Like wats the use of life if it's takes so damn long,

Fuck the world with every ounce of spirit in my chest,
To clear it for the best you'd have to hear it in the flesh,
Just to feel it in my soul I let my spirit unfold,
Fuck this whole world is the only story that I'm told

My head is swimmin with thoughts where I'm literally in strain,
I've bled this venom with the energy of rain,
Through the misery and pain I continue on the backstreets,
Run forever like track meets,
Run and they'll never catch me,
At last we get to see who is the biggest liar,
Who can run this race and finish without gettin tired,
I'm sitting wired to this pipebomb,
Sitting in strain getting the blame like I'm wrong,
I know I'm not even though I won't admit,
That I'm broken with this chokin bit in my lower lip,
I roll a bit in glass shards with open slits in my broken wrists,
Then squint at the smell of the acid that I soak em in,
I hope I win but by the looks of thing I'm gonna be last in four ever,
Like I rap in 4 letters while screamin down this chasm rappin forever.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt3

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 24th, '09, 01:55

Loving these recent 'Fuck the World' drops.

Dope multies and structure though. :y: :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt3

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 24th, '09, 02:01

Appreciate it homie. It's the last one I wrote at that time but will probably make some more sooner or later. Good looking out
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt3

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 24th, '09, 02:04

It'd be fucking awesome if you showed more anger in your drops, IMO.

You're talking a lot about stress and depression and stuff like that, but if you ranted and flamed on several more infuriating topics, it would be crazy. :y: :y:

EDIT: It would also fit the title more. :worship:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt3

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 24th, '09, 02:14

da.relapse.lp wrote:It'd be fucking awesome if you showed more anger in your drops, IMO.

You're talking a lot about stress and depression and stuff like that, but if you ranted and flamed on several more infuriating topics, it would be crazy. :y: :y:

EDIT: It would also fit the title more. :worship:


haha dude as soon as you said that a whole bunch of shit just popped in my head. I'll have somethin up by tomorrow. :shifty: thanks homie
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt3

Postby gutawafang » Nov 24th, '09, 02:17

First verse got me hooked. Makes me wanna read more. I'ma read the last two "Fuck the World pages". Dope. :worship:
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt3

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 24th, '09, 02:18

Thanks for checkin it out guta.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt3

Postby Just Silver » Nov 24th, '09, 02:24

Like i said before its endless
dope ass multi exercising

Feelin the hook

I liked this line: "While my pen glides silently I'm inside rhyming see,
My penstyle's been wild before the inside crime is seen,"
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt3

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 24th, '09, 02:27

3m1n3m Silver wrote:Like i said before its endless
dope ass multi exercising

Feelin the hook

I liked this line: "While my pen glides silently I'm inside rhyming see,
My penstyle's been wild before the inside crime is seen,"


haha yeah thanks man. Last one should be posted up tomorrow. Good lookin out
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt3

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 25th, '09, 18:42

Bump :sweating:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt3

Postby BILI » Nov 29th, '09, 20:09

Again impressive,dope stuff,I just love these Fuck The World,mulites are really dope :worship: ,
Like a tape recorder I was raped in order by nova scoatian disasters,
Shit even my past hurts but I'm steady steppin forward,
Screaming "FUCK THIS WHOLE WORLD" like I was already stressing four words,
:worship:
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt3

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 29th, '09, 20:10

Thanks BILI. Sorry its alot to read :sweating: but really appreciate it man
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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