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Postby BILI » Nov 18th, '09, 20:58

Ok bitches theres nobody iller,then me,Ima fuckin killer
I`ll stab you wit your wifes pussy and make you feel her
Oh I think it would be much better to say your fuckin ex-wife
You wanna know why?Oh,but I wont talk 2 you bout my sex life
I`m not sure will I put you in jail or not,I cant make that decision
But bitch you`re just a waste of bars so get out of the prison
Most of you fuckers cant spit so you fucking swallow
And you guys probably put dicks in each others hollow
Nerds Ima shoot you down easy like you shut down computer
Cause Ima fully grown shooter,rushin through city on scooter
My skill are grownig so fast that I`m already on level you cant match up
I`ll go and rob MacDonalds so fast that even devil cant catch up

Just some random shit
I was just fuckin bored :(
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Re: Ill shit

Postby BILI » Nov 19th, '09, 20:01

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Re: Ill shit

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 19th, '09, 22:04

Haha wasnt lying about the random part. :D
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: Ill shit

Postby BILI » Nov 21st, '09, 20:18

Yah-hah wrote:Haha wasnt lying about the random part. :D

lol
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Re: Ill shit

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 22nd, '09, 00:22

It was dope though homie nice little keystyle thing .Yo homie come check out my new shit man.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Ill shit

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 22nd, '09, 00:29

I like the sex life/ex wife line.....idk how I didn't think of that....good drop BIL
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Re: Ill shit

Postby gutawafang » Nov 22nd, '09, 13:02

It's pretty ill. Didn't like the first few lines. But later it gets better and better. I liked the double meanings in words like "bars" etc.

Good drop. :y:
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Re: Ill shit

Postby BILI » Nov 22nd, '09, 15:33

Thx guys :y:
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Re: Ill shit

Postby MCyobi » Nov 26th, '09, 22:48

Some dope stuff :y:
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Re: Ill shit

Postby BILI » Nov 27th, '09, 21:24

^^thx
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Re: Ill shit

Postby embm » Nov 27th, '09, 22:00

nice
u channelin slim shady? lol
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Re: Ill shit

Postby BILI » Nov 27th, '09, 23:13

embm wrote:nice
u channelin slim shady? lol

thx :D
and I`m not channelin SS :flower: :happy:
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Re: Ill shit

Postby bullet_boy46 » Nov 28th, '09, 05:45

Most of you fuckers cant spit so you fucking swallow
And you guys probably put dicks in each others hollow

:o dope as fuck
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Re: Ill shit

Postby BILI » Nov 28th, '09, 17:42

bullet_boy46 wrote:
Most of you fuckers cant spit so you fucking swallow
And you guys probably put dicks in each others hollow

:o dope as fuck

thx man :happy:
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