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Multies down ya throat ft. Fish

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 28th, '09, 04:00

(Guta)

All the people in the club, hurry up and get your jeans
It's time for a rap song to describe the ghetto scenes
Rap for blings, for rings, necklaces and tennis shoes
This is dedicated to all reckless-ness that pennies use
And the dimes too, the notes, the rocks we climb too
To make your mind blew, it shook, well some lines do
Randomness for the skies to break like glass does
Hop in the damn Ferrari, time to race some fast cars
Scream for these messed bars that pass Mars
To implode the universe, and to depress wars
Prepare your knives, your swords and your shields too
Time to fight with whatever strength that's built you
The Fish to swim and ride with the tsunami in 20-12
Provide time to breathe with a 1.5km neck of a giraffe
Engulf competitors with fiery lava, fire we yah-hah
Then kick you like bouncy meteors, to the far stars

Throw "Yah" syllables in the "guta" because they can't hold me down no,
It's only sound is shown when your homies soundin dope,
Sounds phony now we hope your lonely sounds revoke,
So hush now as we shove these multies down ya throat

Yah-hah

The way my keyboard connects makes my words error-proof,
Fingers like terror groups without the air to shoot,
The weakest MC's are nothin more than the caribou I shoot my arrow through,
I run a thousand miles in this pair of shoes,
Red chucks with lead stuck in the dead rust of my shoelaces,
They way I move places you would swear I had 2 faces,
I'm the true racist with 2 cases of due payments,
I shoot faces at watever saloon they pick,
Wait true racist? I meant to say white power,
As in the white powder I use to write hours of right vowels,
With the right sounds so this multi singes on your earlobes,
They fear strokes from the pen within this deerfolk,
My tears choke, the ears so, I fear no man,
I seer hope, into sheer dope, the way only a hero can,
I write from the inside like bones on my wrist,
The clothes on my hips are owned by a kiss,
The only zone I resist are blown by the clips,
I speak words so swiftly you would swear that my flow won't eclipse,
Till my structure don't exist like chovanist chicks.

Throw "Yah" syllables in the "guta" because they can't hold me down no,
It's only sound is shown when your homies soundin dope,
Sounds phony now we hope your lonely sounds revoke,
So hush now as we shove these multies down ya throat
Last edited by Yah-hah on Nov 30th, '09, 09:33, edited 1 time in total.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Multies down ya throat

Postby shadeonback » Nov 28th, '09, 04:04

banger
When push come to shove, I just stand up and scream “F*ck ‘em all”
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Re: Multies down ya throat

Postby gutawafang » Nov 28th, '09, 04:11

shadeonback wrote:banger

Word. Thanks. ;)
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Re: Multies down ya throat

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 28th, '09, 04:28

:worship: Re-reading over it all. pretty much straight fire
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Multies down ya throat

Postby gutawafang » Nov 28th, '09, 04:36

Yah-hah wrote::worship: Re-reading over it all. pretty much straight fire

:worship: :worship: :worship:

I'ma keep bumping this shit. :worship:

I'm loving it too. :worship:
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Re: Multies down ya throat

Postby Just Silver » Nov 28th, '09, 04:56

Shits dope.
Was figuring there would be more multis but these fit perfect as they were

liked this line by Yah

"Wait true racist? I meant to say white power,
As in the white powder I use to write hours of right vowels,"

Spottin' :y:
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Re: Multies down ya throat

Postby Emadyville » Nov 28th, '09, 05:40

Was money, nuff said :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Multies down ya throat

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 28th, '09, 06:11

Gutaw I liked your first four lines...perfect flow and multis...


Jus...dope line here

Wait true racist? I meant to say white power,
As in the white powder I use to write hours of right vowels,


Overall I would give it a 8.8 out of 10...only cuz I don't like the chorus....sorry chall
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Re: Multies down ya throat

Postby Spyder » Nov 28th, '09, 06:44

loved this man

i noticed you fuys had some multies in there :shifty:
loved the rhyming, and it all made sense, u didnt sacrifice it for multies :y:
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Re: Multies down ya throat

Postby gutawafang » Nov 28th, '09, 08:02

Wow. I'm glad for the positive responses guys. Really really appreciate it a lot. :worship:

More collabs coming soon. :shifty:

More multis. :shifty:

WOOHOO!!! :worship: :worship: :worship:

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Re: Multies down ya throat

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 28th, '09, 08:08

i liked both of ya verses,, hell alot of multies,, sick collab ,, 9/10 ,, keep it comming :y:
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Re: Multies down ya throat

Postby gutawafang » Nov 28th, '09, 08:10

Slim Zaddy wrote:i liked both of ya verses,, hell alot of multies,, sick collab ,, 9/10 ,, keep it comming :y:

Arigato gu sigh must!!! :happy:

More in-depth feed!!! :worship:
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Re: Multies down ya throat

Postby BILI » Nov 28th, '09, 17:47

This was dope guys,I liked both verses,nice multies ;) .flow was good,nice rhymes,overall dope :y:
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Re: Multies down ya throat

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 29th, '09, 08:56

Yeah chorus is iffy sometime I get em good and sometimes they are just ok. Oh well appreciate the feed homies
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Multies down ya throat

Postby gutawafang » Nov 29th, '09, 13:59

BILI wrote:This was dope guys,I liked both verses,nice multies ;) .flow was good,nice rhymes,overall dope :y:

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