Water's Thicker Then Blood (Zaddy'S back Yo )

[Slim Zaddy]

It was eight twenty nine, He grabbed razors an knifes
An stood there behind the gate as the skaters went by
Patiently waitin he prayed for his life, he hated to fight
But the gang surrounded him just as he came to his bike
As he stood there, here's what happend later that night

They all pulled out chains & bats broken blades an glass
Some even had gats an pistols with the aimer attached
He was nervous and scared but determined to square
So they all laughed as they gave him a permanent stare
He thought to his self, knowin if he fought he would fail
So he backed up a little an quickly took off one his belts
They all started to rush, jumpin out the garbage wit guns
But just as he tried to escape he was socked in the gums
His teeth chomped on his tongue, blood clot in his lungs
They all watched em get snuffed, but still they attacked
It was hardly enough so they all started stealing his cash
Beatin him with steel in there hands really killing this cat
He was gaspin for air, tears in his eyes: askin for spare
Beggin for his life thinkin they'd have the passion to care
But just as they continued to punch, he started to smile
Happy to see his brother who he hasn't saw in awhile
But somethin seemed diffirent he look rugged an vicious
It was like no one noticed the gun tucked in his mittens
Suddenly it snapped an then I realized whats happenin
Its not a coincidence, that he had the same rag as them
He was here to rip my brain quick with diffirent gages
As he said "Brother I Love You" he kicked my face in
Just then I knew this kid wanted me killed and doomed
My own brother would help me die just to get in a crew
Later after he hit me, I layed there fracture with kidneys
The bushes shaked, then a shape captured the frenzzy
A flash flickered, all you heard was footsteps takin off
I opened an eye only to see my mom hastefully racin off
Gracfully moaning, I tried to race to the oragne beam
To find out it was a cam corder: makin its own scence
I pushed play; amazed that she was tapin the whole thing

hope you enjoyed it ,,, all feed well be returned friends

[SajN]

Damn bro


That was sick! I started to think of "Dance With The Devil" throughout the piece.

That was crazy, everything, I loved it

[Tomega]

maaaan you've got some story telling talent..

[Fa-Q]

Where ya been Zaddy...anyway good drop, the storytelling is reallyreally good....good shit

[Slim Zaddy]

thanks guys ,, glad u liked it

[Yah-hah]

Yeah man you been out for way too long. Good shit man. Storytellin is mad crazy man.

[gutawafang]

Structure is so fucking DOPE. LMAO. It's like if I put a ruler on the monitor screen, it's almost straight. LOL!!!

It's good flow, seriously. the vocab is dope too. good read, really.

To find out it was a cam corder: makin its own scence
I pushed play; amazed that she was tapin the whole thing

They all watched em get snuffed, but still they attacked
It was hardly enough so they all started stealing his cash

It flows ver very well man. Almost all the lines can be quoted.

[D'Leh]

welcome back homie, and this is a great piece man!!! man thats a story!!!

[Slim Zaddy]

thanks homie ,, really feeling so good comming back ,feels likes home , ,.,,,,,i was away cuz i was busy on studying and staff,, but yeah ,,,,,,,,,, glad to be back again ,, and thank for everyone feed my shit,,,,,,

[neversnooze]

amazing

the flow was great. as i read it, the strength of the piece was good from start to finish. it wasn't boring at all. its nice to see you back

[Spyder]

hopefully that wasnt a true story

dude that was one of the, if the THE best stories ive read on this place

[Slim Zaddy]

:o amazing

the flow was great. as i read it, the strength of the piece was good from start to finish. it wasn't boring at all. its nice to see you back

thanks brother it's nice to see you too ,, happy you liked it

hopefully that wasnt a true story

dude that was one of the, if the THE best stories ive read on this place

thanks alot spyder glad it's the beat story you have read here bro that a push up for me thanks again

[Drama Setter]

Oh Man dope Shit for real , It reminds me Immortal technique stuff , you've got the talent homie , ain't bluffing , keep it coming

[Slim Zaddy]

Oh Man dope Shit for real , It reminds me Immortal technique stuff , you've got the talent homie , ain't bluffing , keep it coming

thanks alot homie ,,,,,,, happy you liked it