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Ice Cream; (Over The Raekwon beat)

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 29th, '09, 03:52

I'll rip her blouse, spit and shout, banging nun like Jesus
pick a house and fuck till soul is hanging from my penis
rip thugs, till they drip blood, a sick stud
that beats a nigga up, till his face get's lift up
slap liars, run with pathfinders and clap fire
must be terminator cause my motherfuckin cap's iron
more bitches wrapped around my steel then a stripper pole
lift a hoe, bust and go then find another clit to blow
Anonymous on fire, bomb higher levels with bitch Leah
have her suck my dick in a bonfire
mind is higher, rhyme messiah, lines are fiya
fuck nines, got pliers, then rip your pussy wires
I'm a soul that's angered, when I flow with bangers
turns planes to submarines, titanic hangars
I'm a nice teen, with ''ice cream''
the ice on my wrist gleams with light beams in eyes like visine
I've never been one to choke, but two to poke
crew is dope, bigger bulls then the roster, hoe
the west nile pauper flow, riding cause I'm honorable
my rhymes shine like saucers, yo
pop fools, drop two of crew, in rocks too
run and steal from corpse loose change from ja rule
People say go to hell, where the fuck the demons at
you believe in raps? well here's a fuckin' semen hat
cause your fucked in, and on top of your head
got rhymes that are popping ya bed, dropping ya dead
nobody, has spit sicker then this ripper
cause I spit quicker, and grip pictures in sick scriptures
Put bulls-eyes on cheek bones like saw puppets
watch as you shit buckets, with nuggets below it
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Ice Cream; (Over The Raekwon beat)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Nov 29th, '09, 03:53

Anonymous on fire, bomb higher levels with bitch Leah
have her suck my dick in a bonfire


total WTF, but great wordplay: can you check out my my bro, need some feedback
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Re: Ice Cream; (Over The Raekwon beat)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 29th, '09, 04:00

Pretty explicit imagery in a good way though. :y:

It's been a long time since you concentrated on complex lyrics, multies, and whatnot. Refreshing break from your usual, bleak perspectives of life. :)

Dope for the most part, although some lines make minimal sense.

P.S.: Never liked that RZA beat. :(
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Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/

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Re: Ice Cream; (Over The Raekwon beat)

Postby Solace » Nov 29th, '09, 04:01

Damn sick, loved the flow and definitely good multies.

It's been a long time since you concentrated on complex lyrics, multies, and whatnot. Refreshing break from your usual, bleak perspectives of life. :)


Have to agree there. :y:
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Re: Ice Cream; (Over The Raekwon beat)

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 29th, '09, 04:02

Relapse.LP wrote:Pretty explicit imagery in a good way though. :y:

It's been a long time since you concentrated on complex lyrics, multies, and whatnot. Refreshing break from your usual, bleak perspectives of life. :)

Dope for the most part, although some lines make minimal sense.

P.S.: Never liked that RZA beat. :(

Point out the lines that don't make sense? :sweating:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Ice Cream; (Over The Raekwon beat)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 29th, '09, 04:05

MC Anonymous wrote:
Relapse.LP wrote:Pretty explicit imagery in a good way though. :y:

It's been a long time since you concentrated on complex lyrics, multies, and whatnot. Refreshing break from your usual, bleak perspectives of life. :)

Dope for the most part, although some lines make minimal sense.

P.S.: Never liked that RZA beat. :(

Point out the lines that don't make sense? :sweating:


I guess they make sense, but they seem like forced multies. :flower:

mind is higher, rhyme messiah, lines are fiya
fuck nines, got pliers, then rip your pussy wire
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/

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Re: Ice Cream; (Over The Raekwon beat)

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 29th, '09, 04:07

Relapse.LP wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:
Relapse.LP wrote:Pretty explicit imagery in a good way though. :y:

It's been a long time since you concentrated on complex lyrics, multies, and whatnot. Refreshing break from your usual, bleak perspectives of life. :)

Dope for the most part, although some lines make minimal sense.

P.S.: Never liked that RZA beat. :(

Point out the lines that don't make sense? :sweating:


I guess they make sense, but they seem like forced multies. :flower:

mind is higher, rhyme messiah, lines are fiya
fuck nines, got pliers, then rip your pussy wire

Hahaha I'd see how you think it's forced. It flows well on beat and it basically means I'll rip out pussy with pliers lol :worship: :worship: Thanks for the feed
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Re: Ice Cream; (Over The Raekwon beat)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 29th, '09, 04:08

MC Anonymous wrote:Hahaha I'd see how you think it's forced. It flows well on beat and it basically means I'll rip out pussy with pliers lol :worship: :worship: Thanks for the feed

I just tried flowing with the beat. Goddamn, it does work. :o
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/

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Re: Ice Cream; (Over The Raekwon beat)

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 29th, '09, 04:10

Relapse.LP wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:Hahaha I'd see how you think it's forced. It flows well on beat and it basically means I'll rip out pussy with pliers lol :worship: :worship: Thanks for the feed

I just tried flowing with the beat. Goddamn, it does work. :o

:worship: :worship: :worship: Hahaha told ya :flower:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Ice Cream; (Over The Raekwon beat)

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 29th, '09, 15:45

Bump It UP! Word to Buddens. :shifty:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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