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You could call me........KEYSTYLE

Postby bullet_boy46 » Nov 29th, '09, 03:46

made this earlier today 3min3m told me to stick to that writing form, and i did, Solace still my sensi :worship:, i thought this was a damn 10/10 when i read it over, i was spitting over a fast beat, and i was like WTF, I just said that. but check for yourself :flower: im not so used to using multis :)

p.s. i put this on yahoo answers, they said 9/10 etc....


You can call me the bar spitter, the lyrical transmitter
Words so shocking they can’t be measured on ammeters
I send out over two billion volts of pure intelligence
And no one can take it in so they call it all irrelevance
But it’s the info I gathered over two million years
With the skill to destroy emcees cuz I hear there fears
They’ve been afraid of me since I started hip hop
It’s like I gripped glocks, making rappers flip flop
But I don’t use guns, I’ve never used a nine millimeter
But when rapping, there’s no stopping neither, no breathers
It’s rap 24 hours per day, mastering the art of wordplay
Letting my mind fly where words may, as my verbs spray
In every direction, but nobody’s words come in my section
Today rappers aren’t stating facts it’s like they guessing
Saying that they the best then, but it’s I who they less then
And they know it, so start confessing, I’m not one to mess with
Last edited by bullet_boy46 on Nov 29th, '09, 03:58, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: You could call me........FREESTYLE

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 29th, '09, 03:56

7/10 Didn't really impress me much, a lot of the lines were boring. Good multies though, I liked it.
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Re: You could call me........FREESTYLE

Postby Just Silver » Nov 29th, '09, 03:58

Ill shit form seems to be working for you a little short though
Multis are on point
really good...

P.S its called a keystyle on the computer
I used to do them all the time in fact i just started writing every now and again

The first 2 bars were real great then it was average
7.4/10

Intro is one of the most important parts and you nailed it :y:
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Re: You could call me........KEYSTYLE

Postby Solace » Nov 29th, '09, 04:07

The fuck you on about biting Bullet Boy? First I find out you were Daddy Coco the whole time and now this?

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index ... 941AAfK0vb

Yes, I do realize you said you put it on Yahoo Answers. But it was posted 1 year ago, when you didn't even write. Sort of a flaw in your plan, you see?
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Re: You could call me........KEYSTYLE

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 29th, '09, 04:08

Solace wrote:The fuck you on about biting Bullet Boy? First I find out you were Daddy Coco the whole time and now this?

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index ... 941AAfK0vb

Yes, I do realize you said you put it on Yahoo Answers. But it was posted 1 year ago, when you didn't even write. Sort of a flaw in your plan, you see?

Exposed. You lost all respect from me, I will never feed you again.
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Re: You could call me........KEYSTYLE

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 29th, '09, 04:10

Another le tunisien? :shakehead:

How the hell did you find that link though, Solace? :confusion:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
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Re: You could call me........KEYSTYLE

Postby bullet_boy46 » Nov 29th, '09, 04:10

i promise to God i did not post this :'( i have to change my pass, I SWEAR, you know my style, especially you solace you friggin taught me :'( i didnt post this
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Re: You could call me........KEYSTYLE

Postby Solace » Nov 29th, '09, 04:11

I copy and paste 2 lines into Google, and then I search.
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Re: You could call me........KEYSTYLE

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 29th, '09, 04:11

Solace wrote:I copy and paste 2 lines into Google, and then I search.


New Nominee for VET. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
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Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: You could call me........KEYSTYLE

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 29th, '09, 04:11

bullet_boy46 wrote:i promise to God i did not post this :'( i have to change my pass, I SWEAR, you know my style, especially you solace you friggin taught me :'( i didnt post this

:n: :n: :n:
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Re: You could call me........KEYSTYLE

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 29th, '09, 04:12

bullet_boy46 wrote:i promise to God i did not post this :'( i have to change my pass, I SWEAR, you know my style, especially you solace you friggin taught me :'( i didnt post this

Lmao @ :'( .

This guy's a joke. :laughing:
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Re: You could call me........KEYSTYLE

Postby Just Silver » Nov 29th, '09, 04:13

Damn...
why ....was wondering how you improved so quickly
hoping you really get to writing
I havent lost respect but... :confusion:

If u didnt bite please prove it :(
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