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Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Nov 29th, '09, 14:01

My passion is writing Shakespearian sonnets (14 lines in iambic pantameter).
I like to challenge myself with writing about different themes and topics.
So give me a theme to write about, anything in the world, and I'll compose a personalized poem based on your idea here. Be as serious or as whacky as you want.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

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Re: Give me a challenge!

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 29th, '09, 14:04

stereotypes :y:

PINK wrote:Chocolate pancakes.

thats shud kill it :laughing:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: Give me a challenge!

Postby Dark Blue » Nov 29th, '09, 15:44

gum
HATERS If you worked your dreams like you do your mouth - things would happen for you
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Re: Give me a challenge!

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Nov 29th, '09, 15:50

PINK wrote:Chocolate pancakes.

"For Hell Cannot, Heaven Shall"

Our mother baked us sweets as she would sing
"The joy that chocolate chips in pancakes bring!"
Then father ate his treats as we would sleep
Awakening, we'd see them buried deep;
My love and I would run, would hide from pain
With everyday that passed, we'd make believe,
We too were wed, as husband, wife, we'd play
(Though never may we have our feigned façade)
As chocolate chips and pancake batter mixed
And as a tragedy would have thee grieve,
You'd sought my kiss, as ran your bloody wrist
And then you said as you would say to God:
__ "I've one request before you sentence me,
__ That chocolate chips in pancakes, Heaven sees"
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
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Re: Give me a challenge!

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Nov 29th, '09, 16:30

Arabian Shady wrote:stereotypes :y:


"White Antichrist"

Katanas kill your women with our blows
If not, they slowly drift to comatose
To dream their dreams of he who's killed the most
The one they'd called their king, the god they've known
We ride you down to death as though possessed
Our epithet unknown, what's known our dress
A cordial mask of jest and epaulettes
With horns that curl with hellish Hessian hex
Katana kamikaze commandänt
Beheading heads with less than common calm
The White Man licks their lips and blood be gone
We bear the six six six upon our palm
__(Wake up, you're only sleeping past the dark,
__ 'tis only thou who sees the branded mark)
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
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Re: Give me a challenge!

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 29th, '09, 17:03

GoodGirlsGetGutted wrote:
Arabian Shady wrote:stereotypes :y:


"White Antichrist"

Katanas kill your women with our blows
If not, they slowly drift to comatose
To dream their dreams of he who's killed the most
The one they'd called their king, the god they've known
We ride you down to death as though possessed
Our epithet unknown, what's known our dress
A cordial mask of jest and epaulettes
With horns that curl with hellish Hessian hex
Katana kamikaze commandänt
Beheading heads with less than common calm
The White Man licks their lips and blood be gone
We bear the six six six upon our palm
__(Wake up, you're only sleeping past the dark,
__ 'tis only thou who sees the branded mark)



AWESOME!!, the flow was incredible and you held the meaning intact, this shit is real homie!! :b:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: Give me a challenge!

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Nov 29th, '09, 17:36

Dark Blue wrote:gum

"Without Tongue, Lest Life be Taken"

I chew my Gum with so much vigor soon
I'll chew my tongue off too and be a mute
And if I'm muted you can then assume
I'll be entombed but soon I'll be exhumed
And when exhumed I'll be a human zoo
Where everyone can look and say "It's true,
near skinless but the skin there is is blue.
I've not seen one thing like him, how 'bout you?"
And after all the laughter that ensues
The shouts of all the crowds I've kept amused
They've sent me to my doom, an empty room
Then having died I'm back inside my tomb
__And all because of Gum, I'm something new
__I'm one that's died not once, but twice 'fore through
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Re: Give me a challenge!

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Nov 29th, '09, 17:39

That was pretty fun! Thanks for that.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
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Re: Give me a challenge!

Postby Just Silver » Nov 29th, '09, 17:56

Mathematical Equations
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Re: Give me a challenge!

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 29th, '09, 20:02

Native Americans
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Give me a challenge!

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Jan 29th, '10, 21:58

PINK wrote:Did you give up on your challenge?

Wow. I forgot all about this.
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Re: Give me a challenge!

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 29th, '10, 22:31

Yeah the three were sick, wanna see more GGGG :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Give me a challenge!

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Jan 29th, '10, 23:36

Just Silver wrote:Mathematical Equations

"I Solve them in my Head"

(as 'a' and 'b' is seen as being 'c'
and 'x' must equal 'y' we see now why
Prometheus hath sown an evil seed,
so man must strive to fantasize of lies)
I've added and subtracted as was told
Now multiply, divide, till I grow old
then round to nearest whole as fear takes hold
..."I die a failure", cry I, "frail and cold"-
-"Goddamn ye, he who makes a number such,
into a 'truth', a truth I cannot find
What magic this! thy abacus untouched
now mine I set aside, as I resign",
___Life's final irony, I find, is this
___I've nothing sharp enough to end it with
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
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Re: Give me a challenge!

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Jan 29th, '10, 23:56

From now on, if anyone reviews my work, please do me the favor of briefly describing how you interpreted it. I'm very curious to see if my ideas are connecting with my audience on a philosophical level, rather than simply the cadences and wordplay being the focus.
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Re: Give me a challenge!

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 30th, '10, 00:10

Wanna see the Native american one
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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