The Ripper's Sickness

[MC Anonymous]

I'm a nobody cause I walk with my spirit
mind is the pen, and then ink's when I spit it
the rhymes that I write, it's lyrical thermite
I burn mics, scared when I spit a few verbs right?
don't needa pack, like U-Haul so crews fall
drop a bomb, nuclear warhead you all
hardcore bar war, rip off car doors,
a carnivor, seen it all before
my palms are sore, fighting bitches calls with swords
leave them on the floor, lighting snitches hearts, it torn
I don't give a fuck, nigga, gotta pay for sex
in this rap game, there's a lot of gays with checks
pay respects, slay them next, gave them slugs
if you wanna try to battle, it's Dangerous
I slay a lot of cattle, it's saving us
the beef that I'm teething with, with razor cuffs
you're motherfucking weak, I don't pay for stuff
cause I've gave enough, living rough in the grufff
and my paper sucks, pay stubs, 0 cents in my bank
destruction? lend me a tank
I'll punch you in the face, like your bullied at prom
only difference is, fucking mullet is gone
I'll pull it and bomb, with your stupid slut on my arm
and fuck her in the ass till the rubber is gone
think you can beat me? what wonder your on?
leave you in eternal slumber in front of your mom
I'm coming with songs, lyrically I hover, you fall
I'm appalled at the wack, why you bustin' at all?
I thrust it, you saw, all I need to claim that I'm best
you getting fucked over like you paying for sex
Put a gash on ya throat, then I'm raping your neck
cause lately I get, the urge, blood spraying and wrecks
wondering in my sleep, who's hating my text
cause if I find out who, I will bathe them in hex
make them dissect, themselves with they health on the line
like a heart monitor, can't ignore me this time
sick and tired of you weaklings, rapping and shit
back assassin, track is smashing, damage clappers with spit
my jabber is sick, average rappers savaged and split
pass me a fifth, ravage saps when passing thousands of clips
zoned out on the microphone, spitting hyper tones
I will fight my own, battles, my sight is blown

[Emadyville]

Rhymes were there, the first 8 bars or so I loved, but after that it just seemed to ramble more than follow any set concept, and the flow itself seemed to drift. Just my thoughts, not your best work by far, multi's was good just concept and flow on this didn't work for me.

[Just Silver]

Great stuff you got here
the flow setup was good imo

liking this line"I'll punch you in the face, like your bullied at prom
only difference is, fucking mullet is gone"
LOL

Overall Piece 8.8/10

[Yah-hah]

I actually like your style. It's not like cut up with a chorus it's just like a tital wave or crazy dope shit. Always diggin it. Check your pm box homie