Unseen hero

[Yah-hah]

Would sleep but I just keep waking up,
Would scream if I even gave a fuck,
I would take the cuts like I'm changed and such,
But don't since I know that I'm fake as fuck
Can't help but live pissed cause I'm an average person,
Cause I live with these rats and vermin,
My past returnin when my raps aint workin,
Close your eyes and peek past the curtain to see a savage lurkin,
Run into my own funeral with my casket burnin,
I pass the person blaspheming the pastor's sermon,
Screaming like 'God dammit this anger management class aint working,
I'm certain my words are falling on deaf ears,
And when I scream it seems only the deaf can hear,
So I'm left in here with this pad and a pen,
'Oh look there's Yah-hah, rappin again,
He's laughin again hes back to actin again,'
I hear the snickers and sneers behind my lonely back,
sayin 'aint that that one cat, aint he so phony and wack',
Like man I'll never be best without my 3 homies back,

I'm staring at these words I have writtin,
It's the food I chew before it's so humbly spitten,
I'm so unsure of myself though these voices say otherwise,
Like No way duke your way doper than those other guys,

But I just sit and wonder why this song I put my heart and more to,
I swore you wrote em dope but they only have 4 views?
I wrote these syllables to use as my disguise,
Hell 2 out of those last 4 were my own replies,
So I'm stuck screamin at these open skies hopin I get struck at least once,
Once at least, Fuck I'm the least of these bunch,
My knees weak I cease to speak the truth,
I spit for days like I died got stuck for 2 weeks in this booth,
Unsure of how to get more people to read my shit,
'The best in CW' yet no one seems to read my shit,
Like yo the multis were dope and ya imagery's nice,
The wordplay is sick I think I read it like twice,
The flow was there but ya structure was off a bit,
So you got a 7.5/10 I had to knock you off a bit,

I'm staring at these words I have writtin,
It's the food I chew before it's so humbly spitten,
I'm so unsure of myself though these voices say otherwise,
Like No way duke your way doper than those other guys,

Like who the fuck are you to judge me,
Computer text like whos the best but me,
Oh ok now he's gonna have an ego,
Now we gotta hear about it everywhere we go,
Like Yah-hah is so dope he's the illest on the mic,
He just kills it when he writes,
I mean fuck it dude why should I even write,
Disguisin the fact that I lack life,
That I'm barely half tight,
Like shit even breathin on that mic,
Won't hide the fact your half white,
I'll go ahead and cut it down for the structure,
So you can bob your head when you dont read this you fucker,
I recite verses with the thunder of a thousand nations,
I'm not aloud to taste it cause I'm too proud to face it,
I mean FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pts 1-4 had like 15 views total, thats rarely seen,
It was 4 pages, 3 verses each with a chorus and everything,
Fuck I even wrote it in CAPS just for you to peep it,
I put my heart in that shit bet you didn't even see it,
Hell I'll probably just have to bump this one too,
I'll check my computer tomorrow, new song-1 view,
So now I feel so broken, zero,
Write so I can be the unseen hero.

[Fa-Q]

But I just sit and wonder why this song I put my heart and more to,
I swore you wrote em dope but they only have 4 views?

Dope line and fuckin true.... Good drop Jus...liked the chorus to

[gutawafang]

I bump this to feed tomorrow.

[Just Silver]

love the concept i might think about doing something like this

liked this multi line for me fit perfect

"I pass the person blaspheming the pastor's sermon"

Multis are where its at in this

"Hell 2 out of those last 4 were my own replies," sounds like me half the time lol
overall 9.1/10

[Yah-hah]

Thanks yall. Just kinda got worked up when I saw the FUCK THE WORLD PAGES had hardly anything and just felt I put so much into it and kinda no one saw it. Might be sounding a bit selfish or watever just wanted some recognition ya know. Appreciate it homies

[Just Silver]

Thanks yall. Just kinda got worked up when I saw the FUCK THE WORLD PAGES had hardly anything and just felt I put so much into it and kinda no one saw it. Might be sounding a bit selfish or watever just wanted some recognition ya know. Appreciate it homies

thats the main reason i dont write too much i try to find a nice amount and not pour everything out

[Yah-hah]

Yeah that kinda how I always felt but then I was like Fuck it and kept doin all I know to do

[gutawafang]

Multis and rhymes.

Fuck the strcutre cuz it flows damn well in this drop.

Title is inspiring.

Awesome man. Keep this up.

[Yah-hah]

Thanks guta

[Relapse.LP]

Loving your multies as usual. Make it seem effortless, although it probably is for a writer like you.

[Yah-hah]

Loving your multies as usual. Make it seem effortless, although it probably is for a writer like you.

Been writing almost daily for like 3 years so it kinda is like multies just sound normal now. Thanks for the feed bro

[Slim Zaddy]

i love the way you write and the emotion you put on each song , you have the ability to make the others feel what you wrote so ya congrats on that , i liked your rhyming scheme , multires and the way it flowed , but chorus can be a little more better but regarding less keep it up 8/10

[Yah-hah]

i love the way you write and the emotion you put on each song , you have the ability to make the others feel what you wrote so ya congrats on that , i liked your rhyming scheme , multires and the way it flowed , but chorus can be a little more better but regarding less keep it up 8/10

Thanks Zaddy. Yeah the chorus was just a part of a verse but it didnt really fit

[Yah-hah]

Bumpin for feed. If you read the song already you are now allowed to laugh in irony.