New identity

[Just Silver]

Took roughly 10 Minutes but i like it myself Shout out to Sajn for the new name

Im looking for a new life, no not cereal
i meant a serial number and be seriously humble
ever get to wondering ,that you want to do one thing
it blows up in your face, and end up stumbling
thats what happened and as much as rapping
means to me, immediately ,i need a napkin
seems to be, so much spit leaving these, seams of me,
even the outline of my dreams are deemed,
as a whole new "identity", like i was "bourne" in a cemetery ,
died in the womb, and wound up screwing up everything
chewing up every beef and swallowing knowledge
proof of ebonics, upcomings short like a hobbit
no biting because i fired my orthodontist
hired a surfer, to just go with flow and the words of
my tsunami wave of controversial conversions,
stay silver never gold, like a Persian ,a perfect person
that sees being the best is just worthless
because you have room to grow like my house was alive
lyrically swords and knives jab away at the spine
of my creaky crooked mind i speak with "hand signs"
and still could keep with the "blind" sink my teeth to the "green"
gotta get my "brine" then regurgitate im nervous losing "weight"
because if i do i will have an antelopes fate, of a neck to break,
and be viable for only a seconds sake, and till the record shakes,
and slips and smashes, i try to get fresh money like Tic Taxes
and a big package, so big you cant grab it, a name so big that Google is lagging
but wait no time for bragging this is my opportunity
to tell you im Just Silver this is my eulogy

[Just Silver]

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Impressive vocabulary.

Great verse overall, although multies could be more abundant, but it wasn't quite that necessary.

[Just Silver]

Impressive vocabulary.

Great verse overall, although multies could be more abundant, but it wasn't quite that necessary.

was going for wordplay more or less

[bullet_boy46]

for 10 minutes this is dope, nice wordplay, nice vocab

EDIT: i couldnt go without saying check mine out

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Impressive vocabulary.

Great verse overall, although multies could be more abundant, but it wasn't quite that necessary.

was going for wordplay more or less

I noticed and it was great. Especially the surfing one, lol.

Can you feed mine? It's pretty damn old, but what the fuck.

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[Yah-hah]

Diggin it homie. Always look forward to seein you improve them pen skills man. Good shit. Like the name too.

[Just Silver]

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