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Hotel Room Service Remix

Postby mcZu » Nov 27th, '09, 19:53

Beat Used

[Intro]
I want everybody to stop what they're doing.
Now if you know you're with somebody you're gonna take the hotel room tonight,
Make some noise...
Meet me at the hotel room [x4]

[Chorus]
Forget about your boyfriend and meet me at the hotel room,
You can bring your girlfriends and meet me at the hotel room. [x2]
We at the hotel, motel, holiday inn. [x4]

[Verse]
Them girls act like angels from an angle
With cash as mere thoughts
While I’m bumping cashmere thoughts
D’evils is the evilest these girls are devils in a dress
Trying to impress me while they press
The upper button in the elevator
Girls on my lap like a pager
Elevated rate of hormones like a trapeze artist
So I try to appease the partic-
..ipants with dough, Joe
Button’s on my shirt, so my fist I pump it up to show
How a fighter moves smooth
With a lighter to Nelly the groove, I do

[Chorus]
Forget about your boyfriend and meet me at the hotel room,
You can bring your girlfriends and meet me at the hotel room. [x2]
We at the hotel, motel, holiday inn. [x4]

[Verse]
Them beautiful girls? Checking
Like a bank deposit of chicks or like cornering the king
Goal? Getting two girls to give me head
Like the heart of queens
Yeah, I get no nah’s like I’m reppin’ Queens
After the wind-work, then, uhm like Jeans
I look at my watch, time ticks
Like a busty girl coming second
And she’s talkin’ diamond like murdering people
Her hands tend to touch in sequels
Touching my chest like Urkle’s clothing style
Verbally seducing but in the mean while
She tells me she’s got a boyfriend
Oh, boy, but I aint leaving it to such an end

[Chorus]
Forget about your boyfriend and meet me at the hotel room,
You can bring your girlfriends and meet me at the hotel room. [x2]
We at the hotel, motel, holiday inn. [x4]
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Hotel Room Service Remix

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 27th, '09, 20:55

mcZu wrote:Beat Used

[Intro]
I want everybody to stop what they're doing.
Now if you know you're with somebody you're gonna take the hotel room tonight,
Make some noise...
Meet me at the hotel room [x4]

[Chorus]
Forget about your boyfriend and meet me at the hotel room,
You can bring your girlfriends and meet me at the hotel room. [x2]
We at the hotel, motel, holiday inn. [x4]

[Verse]
Them girls act like angels from an angle
With cash as mere thoughts
While I’m bumping cashmere thoughts
D’evils
is the evilest these girls are devils in a dress
Trying to impress me while they press
The upper button in the elevator
Girls on my lap like a pager
Elevated rate of hormones like a trapeze artist
So I try to appease the partic-
..ipants with dough, Joe
Button’s on my shirt, so my fist I pump it up to show
How a fighter moves smooth
With a lighter to Nelly the groove, I do

[Chorus]
Forget about your boyfriend and meet me at the hotel room,
You can bring your girlfriends and meet me at the hotel room. [x2]
We at the hotel, motel, holiday inn. [x4]

[Verse]
Them beautiful girls? Checking
Like a bank deposit of chicks or like cornering the king
Goal? Getting two girls to give me head
Like the heart of queens
Yeah, I get no nah’s like I’m reppin’ Queens
After the wind-work, then, uhm like Jeans
I look at my watch, time ticks
Like a busty girl coming second
And she’s talkin’ diamond like murdering people
Her hands tend to touch in sequels
Touching my chest like Urkle’s clothing style
Verbally seducing but in the mean while
She tells me she’s got a boyfriend
Oh, boy, but I aint leaving it to such an end

[Chorus]
Forget about your boyfriend and meet me at the hotel room,
You can bring your girlfriends and meet me at the hotel room. [x2]
We at the hotel, motel, holiday inn. [x4]


:shifty: I'm feelin' it. This verse is one of Brooklyn's finest, no doubt, so all you haters can bring it on and I'll make sure you get regrets.

Can I live?

Anyways, nice verse, but why were you listening to Pitbull? :angry:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Hotel Room Service Remix

Postby embm » Nov 27th, '09, 22:01

good job :y: :)
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Re: Hotel Room Service Remix

Postby mcZu » Nov 27th, '09, 22:19

da.relapse.lp wrote: :shifty: I'm feelin' it. This verse is one of Brooklyn's finest, no doubt, so all you haters can bring it on and I'll make sure you get regrets.

Can I live?

Anyways, nice verse, but why were you listening to Pitbull? :angry:

Lmfao, Pitbull has dope club records. And thanks, appreciate it. :b:

embm wrote:good job :y: :)

Thank you, appreciate it. :b:
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Re: Hotel Room Service Remix

Postby Almostlity » Nov 27th, '09, 22:21

tbh, i haven't heard this song before (Hotel room service).. Its such a great club song lol, great tune. :y:


Good job with this, again! :worship:
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> Alm still goat

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Re: Hotel Room Service Remix

Postby mcZu » Nov 27th, '09, 22:52

Almostlity wrote:tbh, i haven't heard this song before (Hotel room service).. Its such a great club song lol, great tune. :y:


Good job with this, again! :worship:

Thanks Almostlity, appreciate it. And, yeah, it's a dope club record. :b:
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Re: Hotel Room Service Remix

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 28th, '09, 03:58

Dope remix Zu. The line homie pointed it...fire man
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: Hotel Room Service Remix

Postby mcZu » Nov 29th, '09, 23:04

Yah-hah wrote:Dope remix Zu. The line homie pointed it...fire man

Thanks Yah, 'preciate it. :b:
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