Will we ever stop?(feat.Yah-Hah)

[Just Silver]

Yah-Hah:
I forever write in the form of excellence,
Till my name is blue like Zu still reppin it,
Till veterans say I'm heaven sent,
My hand shows where my weapon is as the record spins,
This rhetoric I forever spit is no longer rhetorical,
It's metaphorical, reading past where the portal goes,
I sorta flow in the same way my head shots are just red dots,
My pen'll put you in a headlock till every vein in your neck pops,
Even after you've said stop I continue to write,
Continue to fight till it takes everything up in you to bite,
I keep chasing you with jasons mask like 'wat are you runnin for'?
My uppercuts will make you stumble more than tryin to juggle swords,
While playing tug of war with a bungee chord in a thunderstorm,
My bloods under warm, defrosting in the summer warmth,
I've got the wanted force of a hundred hoardes of jungle boars running from the depths where the thunders born,

Options are.. you keep going or not
Stop n roll we on fire like it or not
we always crazy when we wild out at the shows...will we stop
Damn i dont know.

E-Silver:
Thats you on Youtube hell you've got to be frontin
Rap rules say you lack high quality buttons
Act fool lack "tools" no foundation or nothing
Im ap"pauled" that you never stay "revered"
i do, half of my name was his main career
insane wit entertainment here arrangement of amazement mere
crazed miss goes "ape" shit fuck aint no "cages" here
i keep "coming" back do i taste sincere
bitches with faded hair i guess keep me "experienced"
beat me delirious cheaply dames dirtiness
read peep my arrogance these teach the "marriages" of urban kids
of what true wordplay "carriages".. dont even think i know what average is
or statuses of less than masterin which tackles shit
lyric "linebacker" going to heights of the sun i shine after
wise crackers joke sayers those "players" ok with odes way, with
the way that, i phrase it, the daze of the days, when
no one knew my name and now its explained
the teams will change but the players remain

Options are.. you keep going or not
Stop n roll we on fire like it or not
we always crazy when we wild out at the shows...will we stop
Damn i dont know.......

Will we ever....

[mcZu]

Thanks for the shout out, lmfao.

That said, it's a nice collab. Flow seems good in both verses, multies too and the wordplay is dope too. Keep at it you guys, spotting.

[Drama Setter]

Good job homie , I like the rhyme , sici do, half of my name was his main career

i do, half of my name was his main career
insane wit entertainment here arrangement of amazement mere
crazed miss goes "ape" shit fuck aint no "cages" here
i keep "coming" back do i taste sincerek metaphors up there

best bars

[Yah-hah]

Haha know I always got ya Zu. Good lookin out homies

[Just Silver]

Good job homie , I like the rhyme , sici do, half of my name was his main career

i do, half of my name was his main career
insane wit entertainment here arrangement of amazement mere
crazed miss goes "ape" shit fuck aint no "cages" here
i keep "coming" back do i taste sincerek metaphors up there

best bars

Thanks didnt know if people would understand some of them lol

good lookin out

[Just Silver]

im gonna bump twice this is the first i will later as well lol

[Just Silver]

bump

[Relapse.LP]

Yah-hah's "Jason's mask" references was just ill. Damn, you just flow so well with all those multies still laced within that you make it look simple, although its much more complex than the eye can see.

Silver, your wordplay has improved and you got great multies as well. Especially liked this line:

Im ap"pauled" that you never stay "revered"

Keep working on that wordplay; it's getting better.

Overall, dope piece. Only major issue I really had with it was the chorus. It doesn't really sound like rap, more like conversation, especially the last line, but the verses were all fantastic.

[Just Silver]

about chorus it was a last minute thing both verses were in and i don't practice hooks

[Relapse.LP]

about chorus it was a last minute thing both verses were in and i don't practice hooks

Don't worry about it, lol.

[Yah-hah]

Thanks relapse. Know I always got them multis for ya

[gutawafang]

Couldn't flow that well in Silver's verse. But damn both of you gots some dope multis here and there.

I say it's pretty good collab man.

I didn't like the chorus at all.

[Yah-hah]

Couldn't flow that well in Silver's verse. But damn both of you gots some dope multis here and there.

I say it's pretty good collab man.

I didn't like the chorus at all.

Haha yeah silver kinda rushed it I think with the chorus. Thanks fish