Prove Yourself

[lilrossy]

stressed, drippin sweat as i sit at this desk,
depressed, tryna get this fuckin shit off my chest,
im trippin nd flippin, grippin this pen as im put to the test,
tryna impress, while i express myself thru this text,
as this paper is pressed with this pen, again and again,
im sippin this jin, tryna release these demons within,
my head spins as feelings scream under my skin,
im writing like sin, to jimmy i feel like next of kin,
cuz im tryna win, but somethings pullin me back,
im trapped, but i know i got the potential to kill a track,
but they sayin u aint black, ya hack, u cant rap,
but i stay strapped with a pen and this pads my bomb rack,
on the microphone im droppin them, stages im rockin em,
my pages pack a punch, rappers confront, im sockin em,
with lyrical techniques over beats that enthral the streests,
so sweet, everyone stops and stare when paul speaks,

u only get, 1 chance, 1 rhyme, 1 line,
1 stance, 1 time, to shine and prove yourelf,
u only get, 1 word, 1 mic, 1 light,
be heard, 1 night, to fight and prove yourself.

[lilrossy]

yea jus found the beat like 20 mins ago, jus had to write to it.

[Relapse.LP]

Your chorus seems extremely familiar.

Anyways, nice piece. Laced with multies like raindrops and got some hard lines. Flows pretty well too, although the structure is a little uneven. Overall not bad.

Mind feeding my piece too?

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=72783

[Relapse.LP]

it does sound like Lose Yourself doesn't it?

It also sounds like One Mic, but I'm pretty damn sure that wasn't his intention.

[lilrossy]

thanx for the feedbak man.

yea, the beat sounds like what you here in the middle of the movie.
thought i might do my own version of lose yourself with it.