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Fuck everything

Postby emzee-frenzy » Dec 2nd, '09, 09:26

I'm tired of running in circles in this labyrinth
I've fired my brain 'cause it can't take what's happenin'
Hello. i got you're Dad again, fifth time you give me randsom money
And i'ma keep kidnapping him, fuck it, i gotta live somehow
Saw a police man and beat him to the ground, what now?
Just found a new whore house and i just can't wait
to throw a grenade and watch as they're fake boobs shake
I'm not a painter but i got you're whole place graffed
Fuck a plain, i'm Highjacking a space craft, flew to the sun
Blow it up so now you got nothing to stare at, that's that
anyway, i've been really sad lately, thinking of a fat lady
who just stepped in quicksand and she keep screaming
"Dad, save me!" Damn baby, you look like El Ciupacapra
por favor una samba, la bamba, seniorita del slumber
Sleeping beauty wake up now, damn you're stinky
i got ya, The prince is here with a shovel
Digg you a bed cause i love ya, that don't rhyme
It don't matter, What did i do last summer?
I Met you're fat momma, she's on the news
And on New york times's last number.
Last edited by emzee-frenzy on Dec 2nd, '09, 17:17, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Fuck everything

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 2nd, '09, 15:08

nice shit homie,, i liked ya rhyming scheme , you got some sick lines,, and good mutlies,, keep it up .
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Re: Fuck everything

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 3rd, '09, 06:41

Yo dope man. I wrote some stuff similar you should check it out. It's called FUCK THE WORLD PAGES. Wrote 4 pages. I'm feelin wat ya saying though man big props. Keep rockin man
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: Fuck everything

Postby gutawafang » Dec 3rd, '09, 06:50

man, sounds like a keystyle to me. pretty sudden twists at certain points. lack of story. I mean, it's kinda random to me man.

nevertheless, some skills being seen here. multis etc. :y:

and certain grammatical errors like this:
I Met you're fat momma


It should be YOUR.
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Re: Fuck everything

Postby emzee-frenzy » Dec 3rd, '09, 08:47

It is a keystyle and it is random. Thank's for the notice. i just did it out of boredom. thank's guys. :flower: i've been really busy lately and i don't have tim to write for the forum, i'm working on a theatre play and i'm reading a lot, it helps creativity. :worship:
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Re: Fuck everything

Postby gutawafang » Dec 3rd, '09, 09:02

emzee-frenzy wrote:It is a keystyle and it is random. Thank's for the notice. i just did it out of boredom. thank's guys. :flower: i've been really busy lately and i don't have tim to write for the forum, i'm working on a theatre play and i'm reading a lot, it helps creativity. :worship:

yay! Watch NEW MOON!!! :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: Fuck everything

Postby emzee-frenzy » Dec 3rd, '09, 12:02

I hate twilight
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