That's Just How It Ends

[Solace]

Meh.

See I haven't written for weeks, I haven't spitten in sheets,
You see for me to see her would allow me to keep living you see,
In her essence, essentially present for my presence to be to this second,
This is a lesson, love I should do less in, my memory has lessened,
Before I blast this weapon, I ain't testing with my mind infested,
I see I have been bested, feeling the shame in my own reflection,
With her face engraved, I see it pretty much anywhere I try to go,
Anytime I try to write and fucking any and every time I try to flow,
Give me a semi-automatic and my family starts to panic,
God it's tragic, stop this flawless habit, hate that I'm a modest addict,
And I've never asked for much, looking back oh man it sucks,
Attract this lust, never been a fucking fan of this sadness stuff,
Always thinking about you, 'cause trying to forget didn't work,
And I'll say that shit out loud 'cause I don't need a written word,
Jesus, I wrote this piece to show all of the pieces of my heart left,
Before the little pieces become big diseases in the darkness.

[Just Silver]

Flowed like a motherfucker

Nice way with words

8.8/10

[lilrossy]

flowed well. nice vocab. good emotion.
keep it up man.

[Solace]

Thank you guys. Glad you two enjoyed it.

[Spyder]

i love it man, felt the emo-tion but no, deep piece bro

your use of multies/ rhyme sceme is similar to mine, which is why ur my fav

[Arrinef]

damn that shit hit me hard homie
major props

[gutawafang]

I seen some of the bars before. Still, it's a good job man. Good multis.

[Solace]

Props everyone.

@Guta, yeah the last 4 lines are recycled from 2 other pieces. Nice to know that you still remember them

[classthe_king]

This was dope
Everything you put out recently has been amazing.

[Solace]

Well I haven't written in a while so still getting the "rust" off but still glad you liked it bro. I'll try writing verses more often.

[Solace]

*Bumping it up

[Nimbus_9]

early on I thought you were going to let multies run your verse but it panned out, very nice drop Solace, the last 2 lines closed it out well, very good job

[AOBrien09]

That was nice, had a good flow to it, decent usuage of multies (which helped it flow ).

[BILI]

Wow dope drop from you Solace,muties were good,flow was awesome,and you got good vocab,I can feel this man nice stuff

wanna return feed
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[Solace]

Thanks you 3, much appreciation for the love