mcZu vs. Yah-hah [Yah-hah WINS]

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[Verse]
..In my parietal lobe lies an accidental code
And coincidental the coin flipped up my mental scope
Navigating through an endless ode
The guillotine cut off the youth and left a phob-
..ia for me to be a vague orbital ghost
Shadow less, yes, bone marrow and flesh
Are left at the stone cold rock like desk
Where I wrote my last sentence to death…

[Chorus]
Memories echoing with every brain step
It seems that I’m stuck in this insane trap… [2x]

[Verse]
Ink left a trail for me to entail a last task
Thinking ‘bout the words rubixing at a flash sec-
..ond painting a lament message
Sane plain essence in these mass edges
Mashing with a precision through my head
Decisions boost my thorough in depth
View of the room that’s left in a mess
Looking like a murder scene based on Identity theft…

vs.

[Verse]
Screamin with my soul from this disconnection,
Ever since my rib direction was ripped in sections,
So I'm watchin the reverend, speakin of my life,
Watchin my freaking time-line and the weeping of my wife,
Weeping so hopeless, I'm weak and I know it,
I knee-deep in rose stems while my body's seen decomposin,
I'm freeing my soul it's disguising how this fool's hell sent,
I'm bleeding so cold it's suprising how cool hell is,

[Chorus]
I see the world through my casket doors,
Till my soul starts seepin through the cracks in the floors,
At the blackest source my core comes out and rhymes,
Am I laughin of course it's a bout damn time,

[Verse]
Time keeps slippin runnin faster and faster,
My souls vision blacker my whole missions laughter,
It always ends in disaster so keep the funeral music playing,
I can hear the music straying from the few words that I’m saying,
In the distance the violin screams such violent screams,
The lion clings like tyrant kings to my quiet things,
So flying seem easy with such giant wings,
Yet they cease to exist behind the mist of these myan dreams

[Chorus]
I see the world through my casket doors,
Till my soul starts seepin through the cracks in the floors,
At the blackest source my core comes out and rhymes,
Am I laughin of course it's a bout damn time

Voting must be completely unbiased. If you already have a faint idea who you're going to vote for before even reading the submissions, don't even bother voting.

You must also break it down into the four categories: Relevance, Originality, Complexity, and Likability, or your voting will not be counted in the final tally.

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[Fa-Q]

Well I say Yah and here's the ratings

Structure - for both were 10's no problem there

Multis - I give Yah 9.5 and Zu 7.5

Vocab - Both were 8's

Punches - There really was none so that will just be a 5

Totals - Yah - 32.5/ Zu - 30.5


Both were dope but in my book it comes down to multis....even if everything else is off and Yah was on top

[Wic Kid]

1. Relevance - Yah. Cuz at some places I didnt know what exactly did Zu talk about. Yah was goin more step by step IMO.

2. Originality - Zu. Really brilliant and unseen (at least to me) approach to the topic

3. Complexity - Yah. His flow was lot better, and the multies were great. Internal rhymes are also where they supposed to be.

4. Overall Enjoyability - Yah. I enjoyed Zu's piece too, but I felt Yah's more.


So Yah-hah gets my vote.

[Spyder]

when the fuck did this start

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Well I say Yah and here's the ratings

Structure - for both were 10's no problem there

Multis - I give Yah 9.5 and Zu 7.5

Vocab - Both were 8's

Punches - There really was none so that will just be a 5

Totals - Yah - 32.5/ Zu - 30.5


Both were dope but in my book it comes down to multis....even if everything else is off and Yah was on top

Sorry, but your vote cannot count until you break it down into the categories I described in my OP.

Has to be that; laid down the rules long ago.

[Wic Kid]

I was thinkin bout the same thing, but I didnt want to say anything. I've been waitin for you to do it, cuz you run this shit.

My vote does count, right?

[Relapse.LP]

I was thinkin bout the same thing, but I didnt want to say anything. I've been waitin for you to do it, cuz you run this shit.

My vote does count, right?

Yeah. 1-0.

I'll post another battle right now, just for the heck of it. I'm still missing some verses from peeps, but who cares; I'll reorganize the parings.

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People sleeping... vote!

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Upping...

[Wic Kid]

Relevance - Yah. Cuz at some places... Shit, I already voted.

Just kiddin. Im finna vote Relapse vs. Guta.

EDIT: And for fucks sakes, vote people!

[Relapse.LP]

Relevance - Yah. Cuz at some places... Shit, I already voted.

Just kiddin. Im finna vote Relapse vs. Guta.

EDIT: And for fucks sakes, vote people!

Voting is good.

I can't vote, since I'm the organizer and it might seem biased.

[Yah-hah]

I think you should be able to vote just not on your own, especially if the competitors were chosen randomly. You are just kinda the guy in charge of keepin it organized. Big props for doin it by the way. IDk if it matters though lol

[Relapse.LP]

I think you should be able to vote just not on your own, especially if the competitors were chosen randomly. You are just kinda the guy in charge of keepin it organized. Big props for doin it by the way. IDk if it matters though lol

Yeah, I might vote on my own if people keep sleeping.

All my organization went to waste, since lots of people kept withdrawing and some don't even have their verse in by today. It's so confusing, lol.

[Yah-hah]

Yeah I know. good job doin it alone though bro. I think you should be able to vote on other people's peices though, especially since voting is kinda slow

[Wic Kid]

This shits gettin embarassin. 3 battles, and only two guys voted, me and Yah.

You fuckers.