random verse (about love obviously)
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Re: random verse (about love obviously)
by eminemgirl1234 » Dec 1st, '09, 17:12
Awwww! I have you ever gave this to her? or rapped it for her?
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...
Malina a.k.a Mickey
"Ignorance is your new best friend!"-Paramore
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...
Malina a.k.a Mickey
"Ignorance is your new best friend!"-Paramore
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Re: random verse (about love obviously)
by Solace » Dec 5th, '09, 02:56
It was iight. Scotty I've read MUCH better, like eons better from you. Not sure what happened here but whatever, it was still somewhat enjoyable and you kept it above average. Would've enjoyed more multies, a smoother flow (well I couldn't read the flow that well) and maybe some more imagery.
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