D.O.N. - The Suicide Of Mine

[classthe_king]

This was pretty dope, i prefer just straight up putting the verse out without adding anything else to it but whatever is good. Glad to see someone else with talent has joined tr.

[Spyder]

it was alright for me, message was alright
i didnt really see anything that stuck out to me. whole thing was bland

but by saying dont judge me as a newcomer, 1 thats the feed you get
and 2. your gonna have to come alot harder to be with the top dogs

just honest feed

[Yah-hah]

Yo man welcome to the CW. That was some pretty dope shit. Diggin the storytellin man. like how you separated your lines and Satan's was a nice touch. Look forward to more fire man

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

It has a dark, gothic feel to it. It's awesome.

[gutawafang]

You're Godfather???!!!

Cool rhyming skills man. The punctuations and the wavy hyphens were pretty redundant. Othewise it's dope man. Keep doing it.

[Solace]

Nice stuff. Glad to have a new creative writer here. I enjoyed your multies a lot. Concept is real good and flow was smooth. You should get around to doing some audio.

[Drama Setter]

Good Job