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Buncha Punches ft. Fa-Q & Yah-Hah

Postby Just Silver » Dec 6th, '09, 00:35

Just Silver:
I stay frequently speaking the decency of my own "eatery",
shown these "MCs" I've ate beef recently ,blood guts in my teething ring,
bust "nuts" in a "tree" ,of these "families" ,damn right i get my needs,
slam slightly forward breathe, a crashing death of word metaphoric-ally,
best enjoy the "feat", of my testing of the weak ,pestering then chief
a pound of weed, lit up around the week, so damn you "down" for me
cause i cant, be too "high" to "under"-stand spit so hot make glass when i cover sand, im a task that should be "banned" try to be at my top "C-Stars" the way i "rock", Believer or not ,i make sluts Sack- Religious and worship my cock,
See i take these paltry pastry mcs on the pantry, awfully been against me because i rip it too "sweet" 14 shots your "too weak" pig flow gotta eat em all ..Suey! too great sue me so "grate" and flow deep. No breaks I dont sleep so fakes i warn these people i do more "beams" then local bakeries meaning the "cake or cream" if you cant relate to my get the fuck out of the family.
I answer all "F-AQs" and get "green" like "Eses" you should do an essay too
this is the best damn crew "for-umm" i forgot score one for the block this collab needs "threads" like a rich mans "bed top" i will keeping thinking till my head pops

(2x)Whatever the hunch of these ramblin dumbfucks
if they think their sick prepare to get fucked up
a buncha punches mixed with a flick of a wrist
screw crutches we the shit in the midst of this

F-aq:

I see Christina, I'm about to fuck the fuckholes on this singer,
The fingerfuck her pussy, til I'm up to the knuckles on my finger,
How come every girl that wins american idol is are fat fucks, that sucks,
Jordin sparks needs to lose some fuckin weight,
Kelly Clarkson needs to lose some fuckin weight,
If you have children cunt, good luck with fate,
I fell in a trance, where I was fuckin michelle branch,
Then when I left, went on ebay to try and see her pants,
Bitch, don't make this bastard wait,
Standin in hurricane trying to masterbate,
Its crashin straight, into the beach with bitches,
Tring to flirt with disasters fate, until all that's left is a cloud of smoke,
I'm going to smack an MC that will remain anonomous,
Until he's to proud to gloat,
Am I allow to poke, a girl on face book,
Until her face looks like, the bass shook,
A little to hard and fast, like if Dres on the boards,
That even bloods and crips, stays in their Fords,

2x)Whatever the hunch of these ramblin dumbfucks
if they think their sick prepare to get fucked up
a buncha punches mixed with a flick of a wrist
screw crutches we the shit in the midst of this

Yah-Hah:
I rule the "middle" like the sultan of crunches
Coming through with "multi"ple "punches",
I'll leave you breathless like you took a chest kick or a throat full of punches,
Future so bright I'm on my light bulb shit,
I'm tight on it the way my lypo fits,
I'm on some psycho shit,
I lie so quick shit I'm Micheal Vick with 5 mo' pits,
I'm clutchin ya throat with my ice cold grip,
You're so far behind me I can't understand you, shit's like Mandarin to me,
Cause I'm so stiff on my own shit I couldn't get laid givin my own manican rufies,
I'm not sure wat this mexixcan's doing like I messed with his roofing,
Hell I suck at punchlines but I still got my boxing gloves on yellin 'I'm not impressed when you spit',
I confess it I'm sick, your mouth is only good for providing my testicles with a symmetrical fit,
My words go together like sex and moan,
I'm so dope the center for methadome is considered my 2nd home,

(1x)Whatever the hunch of these ramblin dumbfucks
if they think their sick prepare to get fucked up
a buncha punches mixed with a flick of a wrist
screw crutches we the shit in the midst of this







(chorus was last minute)DISCLAIMER
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Re: Buncha Punches ft. F-aq & Yah-Hah

Postby classthe_king » Dec 6th, '09, 00:50

This structure is just atrocious.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Buncha Punches ft. F-aq & Yah-Hah

Postby Just Silver » Dec 6th, '09, 01:26

classthe_king wrote:This structure is just atrocious.

figured people would say that
i usually just read peoples stuff i dont care about structure just my opinion :smoking:
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Re: Buncha Punches ft. F-aq & Yah-Hah

Postby Just Silver » Dec 6th, '09, 01:51

please no structure comments :sweating:

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Re: Buncha Punches ft. F-aq & Yah-Hah

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 6th, '09, 01:58

Damn man I tried to get a hook all day but couldn't yours is great by the way
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Re: Buncha Punches ft. F-aq & Yah-Hah

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 6th, '09, 01:59

Couldn't delete this
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Re: Buncha Punches ft. F-aq & Yah-Hah

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 6th, '09, 02:00

Can you fix my name in the title....the dash is after the "a"
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Re: Buncha Punches ft. F-aq & Yah-Hah

Postby Just Silver » Dec 6th, '09, 02:01

Fa-Q wrote:Can you fix my name in the title....the dash is after the "a"

got it

wish i could have fixed my structure but i dont see it as much of a problem but obviously others do
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Re: Buncha Punches ft. Fa-q & Yah-Hah

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 6th, '09, 02:05

Yea I know fuck structure it doesn't really matter....could you capitalize the "Q" in my name too lol
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Re: Buncha Punches ft. Fa-Q & Yah-Hah

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 6th, '09, 05:19

FUCK STRUCTURE. Love ya class but you care way too about structure. This was a mess around track anyways. IDk man the only people feeding wrote the song lol
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Buncha Punches ft. Fa-Q & Yah-Hah

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 6th, '09, 05:22

i wish i knew more and could be more in depth but i liked it none the less

cool names by the way, very orginal

what's a Gutawang, a Yahah, or a Fa-Q? :p
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Re: Buncha Punches ft. Fa-Q & Yah-Hah

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 6th, '09, 05:24

Well guta's has to do with sonebody famous in asia I think. Yah-hah is my Native name and Fa-Q is all wordplay lol. Sound it out like fu-Q (fuck you) Thanks for feeding homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Buncha Punches ft. Fa-Q & Yah-Hah

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 6th, '09, 05:26

Nimbus_9 wrote:i wish i knew more and could be more in depth but i liked it none the less

cool names by the way, very orginal

what's a Gutawang, a Yahah, or a Fa-Q? :p

Guta aint on here?
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Postby Yah-hah » Dec 6th, '09, 05:28

HAHAHAHAHA nice
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Buncha Punches ft. Fa-Q & Yah-Hah

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 6th, '09, 05:29

Yah-hah wrote:Well guta's has to do with sonebody famous in asia I think. Yah-hah is my Native name and Fa-Q is all wordplay lol. Sound it out like fu-Q (fuck you) Thanks for feeding homie


thank you for filling me in :y: just so you know i have alot of respect for Native Americans and am truly ashamed our country would give Indians blankets covered in small pox, truly inhumane and uncalled for :y:
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