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Real Deal

Postby j2dat » Dec 6th, '09, 04:40

its ya boy j2...



j2dat back, why everybody so quiet? it's time to riot
you aint feelin my shit, dont hide it, learn a way to fight it
cuz i aint goin nowhere, aren't u so delighted
your all invited, who for me to merk first, i ain't decided
but when i do i suggest u seek and and try to fight it
cuz im comin with a bang, we ain't the same, ya'll so bias...
im real your fake, ur garbage im prime cut like steak,
ya'll aint even prime wit ya ryhme,
and by the way i keep my shit tucked so watch what u say this time...
this is it son...this is what its all about..
now dont make me go shovin my dick in ya mouth...
real deal...j2...
on the battlefeiled...i should gets thousands of tears tattoos
for every rapper i chew, gotta another one on brew...
shit...im rockin solo..i don't even need no crew..
got some issues yea a few, but put em all aside to handle a bitch like you...
emotion? i'll give ya emotion
i got the potion n motion to make a murder look easy...
while ya posin next to ya boy's beggin to be on his c-d...
this a free-be
i think ya'll be lost without me which means u need me...
and i aint got no plans on leaving...

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Re: Real Deal

Postby Requiem » Dec 6th, '09, 04:43

liked it :y:

u had a decent flow, and the rhymes were ok... keep it up man

"your all invited, who for me to merk first, i ain't decided"

that line was a little awkward imo
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Re: Real Deal

Postby j2dat » Dec 6th, '09, 04:45

thanks man...yeah juz keystyled it

lol *merc aka kill something.. lol

basically whoever wants some come get some lol...

not aimed to anyone towards here, juz gettin shit off my chest lol

thanks man for the feed
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Re: Real Deal

Postby gutawafang » Dec 6th, '09, 13:00

Good mutlis man. Flow's pretty okay too. Nice.
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Re: Real Deal

Postby j2dat » Dec 6th, '09, 20:14

gutawafang wrote:Good mutlis man. Flow's pretty okay too. Nice.


thx :D

PINK wrote:Nice. I like it. Wonder what's that all about. :whistle:


nobody lol :8)
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Re: Real Deal

Postby BILI » Dec 6th, '09, 20:22

Better then your other drop,flow was nice,rhymes were better,it had some nice multies,keep doin your thing ma

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Re: Real Deal

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 6th, '09, 20:24

Flows great....maybe throw in some multis next time....good drop man
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Re: Real Deal

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 6th, '09, 20:44

flow is good because of the short lines and lack of multies, not necessarily good but since you keystyled it, it's okay, you have the ideas right just try to be more complex, keep it up man :y:

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