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Anger.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 6th, '09, 03:38

It's ridiculous to me, people living in their death
as if the life their living in is giving in to breath
and because their dieing, their trying to take me with
psychopathic motherfuckers can sit and suck on my dick
Lyrically, everything that I be busting is sick
I don't give a fuck who you is, you nothing but bitch
always got something to spit, every rhyme that I rip
kills every line that you spit, I'm the nicest at this
I go it strapped with vices and grips, despising my shit?
You'll will get sliced up and split, man you know I can rip
Despite what mothefuckers say, doesn't matter to this
I'm the motherboard of rapping, with a syphilis clit
Lyrically, experimentally, detrimentally, mentally
was meant to be an entity of infinite energy
elementally spellbound to hunting my enemies
with 7 hypodermic needles implanted in memories
chemical emergencies, when I rip it and spill
Tylenol pills filled inside my bill and still
I kill every single rhyme, rip it one at a time
I run with the track so I'm never behind
with letters divine they shine, make me double my green
with more nines around me, then bubble machines
Fuck anyone who doubt me, hardcore aura, I pounce thee,
with just a fucking ounce of brown seeds
impale you with stalagmites, busting from ground
how's it feel, having your intestines thrusting around
hardcore? scratch ya iron off like lottery tickets
you run and cry with screams, man you got to be bitches
prodigy sickness ripping, the odyssey switched with
my rhyme book, now you read the swine flu with it
Sick, witness this shit, sadistic magic apparatus
blast ya hippo-campus with a pint of acid, now imagine
Crack a diamond with my forehead and sniff the crystals
now my skull is all powerful, sneezing nickles
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Anger.

Postby gutawafang » Dec 6th, '09, 03:44

I'm the motherboard of rapping, with a syphilis clit :confusion:

impale you with stalagmites, busting from ground :y: :y: :y:

Sick, witness this shit, sadistic magic apparatus
blast ya hippo-campus with a pint of acid, now imagine
Crack a diamond with my forehead and sniff the crystals
now my skull is all powerful, sneezing nickles :worship: :worship: :worship:

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Re: Anger.

Postby Requiem » Dec 6th, '09, 03:55

pretty sick man.. still the anonymous we all know and love...

the whole thing was too big to quote so just "fucking dope" should do it :smoking:
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Re: Anger.

Postby j2dat » Dec 6th, '09, 04:14

:o holy shit!

this was dope man

Despite what mothefuckers say, doesn't matter to this
I'm the motherboard of rapping, with a syphilis clit
Lyrically, experimentally, detrimentally, mentally
was meant to be an entity of infinite energy
Mary Jane knock I answer with open arms (hello?)
And every weekend's a smoke-a-thon - Banks


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Re: Anger.

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 6th, '09, 05:32

This one is fuckin crazy bro. Usually the big words seem kinda unecessary to me but this one the were perfectly placed. syphilis clit line is dope. Yeah man insane track right here. on a whole different level
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Re: Anger.

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 6th, '09, 05:51

although i cannot give in depth feed based on my inexperience, after early speculation made me think this would be a verse full of prolix and psuedo intelligent ramblings it actually made sense and all was very nicely put together, i liked it, and i gather from your battle rap record you are the "man" on this site, good job with this :y: i'll be sure to check further drops from you and hopefully learn something along the way
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Re: Anger.

Postby Arrinef » Dec 6th, '09, 06:08

Requiem wrote:pretty sick man.. still the anonymous we all know and love...

the whole thing was too big to quote so just "fucking dope" should do it :smoking:

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Re: Anger.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 6th, '09, 15:07

Thank you all for the feedback :worship: :worship: :worship:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Anger.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 6th, '09, 15:19

PINK wrote:Fucking amazing. :worship:

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LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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