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mcZu vs. Yah-hah [Yah-hah WINS]

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Re: mcZu vs. Yah-hah (CW Tournament Battle)

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 5th, '09, 14:05

Relevance - goes to Zu cause his verse has, imo, more importance and more of a message to it.

Originality - Yah always comes out the gate with wierd structure and weird concepts but this time it was right on point and had great Originality.

Complexity - Yah had crazy Complexity with his multis and rhyming scheme.

Likability - Yahs fosho, it was easier to read and to follow and for a shallow piece (meaning short) it got me hooked

^my vote is Yah in case there was any confusion...and sorry no one voted....you work hard for anything in CW there is hardly any payback at all
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Re: mcZu vs. Yah-hah (CW Tournament Battle)

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 5th, '09, 20:24

2-0 for Yah-hah.

Keep it coming, peoples. ;)
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Re: mcZu vs. Yah-hah (CW Tournament Battle)

Postby noel » Dec 6th, '09, 12:47

I am sort of new at this but here I go...

Relevance- Yah; first line- I liked how it was upfront and direct.

Originality - don't know (sorry...)

Complexity- McZu

Likability- Yah. I really liked it when I first read it.

Overall- Yah!!
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Re: mcZu vs. Yah-hah (CW Tournament Battle)

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 6th, '09, 20:32

noel wrote:I am sort of new at this but here I go...

Relevance- Yah; first line- I liked how it was upfront and direct.

Originality - don't know (sorry...)

Complexity- McZu

Likability- Yah. I really liked it when I first read it.

Overall- Yah!!

3-0 KO.

Yah-hah proceeds to the next round. :)
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The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: mcZu vs. Yah-hah [Yah-hah WINS]

Postby mcZu » Dec 6th, '09, 20:36

Congratz Yah. :b:
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Re: mcZu vs. Yah-hah [Yah-hah WINS]

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 7th, '09, 07:50

Thanks bro. Your was was sick man. Good job
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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