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Hell's Symphony

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 6th, '09, 15:57

Blood dripping, see me when they thugs slipping
got the bugs itching to smash with slug clipping, this mortician
this lyrical sword spitting whore ripping with incisions
gripping the lyrics in my hand, to spit and slit bitches
get by, let guys gets black eyes for wack lies
lyrical track by's, and that's why
people get shot up, I'm the best to rock US
states in a dome, with the white house locked up
I rap in sign language, don't ever try to rhyme basic
crack your fucking spinal cord in nine places
sickest individual with lyrical
millimeters of ether I reap ya, peep the miracles that I spit at you
vortex of more text, cerebral cortex
leaves my brain sucked like it's oral sex
break your whole neck, leave you on the floor dead
with more lead, it's blood shed,your poor head
crushed on the bottom of a steel toe boot
only thing you flow through is the cracks, oh you..
a hoe too, getting fucked up with no price
hit you with a pole nice, whole night I throw right
getting your body messed up, for getting dressed up
with less punks around you, go ahead ____ let's buck
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Hell's Symphony

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 6th, '09, 16:03

not bad, nothing special really to me but solid rhyming and decent lyrics

i like it, keep it up :y:
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Re: Hell's Symphony

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 6th, '09, 16:08

Nimbus_9 wrote:not bad, nothing special really to me but solid rhyming and decent lyrics

i like it, keep it up :y:

Haha thanks, I've been getting away from my story telling/surrealism to work on street type lyrics. :worship:
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Re: Hell's Symphony

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 6th, '09, 16:16

MC Anonymous wrote:
Nimbus_9 wrote:not bad, nothing special really to me but solid rhyming and decent lyrics

i like it, keep it up :y:

Haha thanks, I've been getting away from my story telling/surrealism to work on street type lyrics. :worship:


that has been the downfall for many rappers Mr.Anonymous, just remember your roots

do you do audio?
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Re: Hell's Symphony

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 6th, '09, 16:22

Nimbus_9 wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:
Nimbus_9 wrote:not bad, nothing special really to me but solid rhyming and decent lyrics

i like it, keep it up :y:

Haha thanks, I've been getting away from my story telling/surrealism to work on street type lyrics. :worship:


that has been the downfall for many rappers Mr.Anonymous, just remember your roots

do you do audio?

Yes. :)
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Re: Hell's Symphony

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 6th, '09, 16:29

i'm looking forward to it very much :y:
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Re: Hell's Symphony

Postby classthe_king » Dec 6th, '09, 17:35

Nimbus_9 wrote:i'm looking forward to it very much :y:


seriously check it out, hes really good.
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