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I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

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I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

Postby BILI » Dec 6th, '09, 18:42

I`ll take you to my clan,and make you remember some members
Cause we`re about to dismember some dissemblers in December
Searchin for kids in fun-fair,hopin they`re alone,oh there`s one there
Now I`m gonna go wit my gun there,and silently kidnap him unprepared
I`m just a lunatic that aint lavish when it comes to giving stabs
I`m that guy in your street thats living bad,makin experiments in his lab
Man I think its normal to run through the crowded mall,wit my 45 colt
Police cant catch me cause I`m faster then Bolt,thunder struck me wit 5045 volts
Bitch fallow me if you wanna war,come to my basement I wanna show you my sword
Ima crazy Cro in a ward,and I`ll blow you wit my C4,that`ll place you below your floor
Where do you people live?You think you saw all when you meat crazy suicidal terrorist
Well NOO,I`m worst,If you dont believe me,ask my crazy idle psychotherapist
First time I tasted blood I was like"Bitch I Like It",It was just like I`m BILI
You`re afraid,"Because I`m Lyrically,Ideal" so you cant kill me,I`m BILI?
And bitches you aint ready for my brutality.Raps?Who wanna challenge me
Battlin me is danger see,my raps do kill,they stop your heart,my mentality??
Do I have brain??Am I smart??Sure,how else would I top these fuckin charts
Not music charts,but charts in extracting hearts,and pulling human parts
Ima at the party,girl come sit next to me,dont worry,I just wanna slip you this ecstesy
And then when it starts to effect,I`ll take you to my room and make you have sex wit me
I only know one reason why we need women,and its to put our dicks in`em
You think we cant do it that way but we can,you know why?cause we`re man

If you didnt get it
Bitch I Like It=BILI
Because I`m Lyrically Ideal=BILI

Smh new :flower:
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Re: I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 6th, '09, 18:51

Good shit man dope drop...like the first 10 bars
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Re: I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

Postby BILI » Dec 6th, '09, 19:28

Fa-Q wrote:Good shit man dope drop...like the first 10 bars

thx man :y:
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Re: I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

Postby j2dat » Dec 6th, '09, 20:46

still crazy 4 sure! lol

haha i liked it...at the end it seemed it slacked off a bit but overall
nice drop :y:
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Re: I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

Postby BILI » Dec 6th, '09, 21:03

j2deezy wrote:still crazy 4 sure! lol

haha i liked it...at the end it seemed it slacked off a bit but overall
nice drop :y:

yeah i got bored so the end was weaker
thx for the feed man
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Re: I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

Postby BILI » Dec 7th, '09, 12:08

Bumpin this
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Re: I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 7th, '09, 14:13

Flowed pretty easily for me. Good shit bili. keep rockin it :y:
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Re: I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

Postby BILI » Dec 7th, '09, 22:33

Thx Yah
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Re: I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

Postby Solace » Dec 8th, '09, 00:17

Damn dude, I swear it's been a while since I read your drops and you've improved a lot. The flow and multies kept me in there, no homo haha, 'cause that's what I really enjoy mostly. Not all of it was like insanely good, I think because it was long of course you couldn't keep the pace up everywhere. But nice stuff, keep at it bro :y:
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Re: I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

Postby gutawafang » Dec 8th, '09, 03:50

Motherfucking dope originality there man. :worship:

Man I think its normal to run through the crowded mall,wit my 45 colt
Police cant catch me cause I`m faster then Bolt,thunder struck me wit 5045 volts :worship:

First time I tasted blood I was like"Bitch I Like It",It was just like I`m BILI
You`re afraid,"Because I`m Lyrically,Ideal" so you cant kill me,I`m BILI?
GENIUS. :worship:

Not music charts,but charts in extracting hearts,and pulling human parts
LOL at that. :confusion:

Overall, dope. :worship:
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Re: I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

Postby BILI » Dec 8th, '09, 22:28

Thx a lot Soalce and Fish,I really appreciate it
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Re: I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

Postby BILI » Dec 9th, '09, 18:35

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Re: I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

Postby Spyder » Dec 9th, '09, 23:14

glad to see you improving so much man

for me maybe the lines were a tad to long, but they were good none the less
make sure you make sense with everything you say thought, like Thunder cant strike you lol

nice multies in there and rhymes. id like to see you go on a different topic ya know?
kinda change it up see where else u can write with

little note: somewhere in the top it says Meat... should be Meet ;)

but i like the naemplay u did with yourself, overall dope peice from you bro :y:
just honest feed helping you get better :smoking:
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Re: I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

Postby BILI » Dec 10th, '09, 22:54

^^thx man
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Re: I`m still BILI(I`m still crazy)

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 11th, '09, 04:27

i thought it was entertaining, good flow, liked it man, keep it up :y:
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