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Nimbus - Inhuman (The Nephilim)

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 6th, '09, 20:22

Disclaimer: The Bold Lines Are From TR Which Is What Inspired Me.

(Chorus)
If You’re Asian, You’re Jin, White, You’re Eminem
Black, You’re A Gangster, Just Try To Live With It
Stifles Penmanship, Stereotypes Bring Death To Men
I Rebuke This Process, Nimbus is Nephilim

(Verse)
Liquid Courage Forge Liquid Swords Hit With The Force
Of Fists Of God Enclenching Cities In The Mist Of Dawn

Don’t Get Me Wrong, I Sling Brigades A Crossed The Battlefield
Enhanced Soldier, Implants Boulders In The Average Shield
Fists Of Crafted Steel, Unmatched Hydraulic Arm Strength
That Disarm Flanks Of Tanks From Hundred Yard Lengths
Bars Discard Armored Plates, No Doubt It’s Me
God’s Fallacy, Hell Spawned, Satan’s Proud Of Me
To Who Doubted Me, For Now I’ll Spit With Clarity
Know You Fucked Up, Like Stanky Legging With An Amputee
Destined To Rip With Terror See, A Heresy, The Atheist
You’re Conclusive Proof God’s A Myth, You Plagiarist
With Punches I’m A Pugilist, And So Petulant With
Flow Is So Fluent It’s A Space Age Coolant An
A Nuisance, Shit, Rhetoric Is Wicked, Developing
The Proof That Nimbus Is The Nephilim

(Chorus)
If You’re Asian, You’re Jin, White, You’re Eminem
Black, You’re A Gangster, Just Try To Live With It
Stifles Penmanship, Stereotypes Bring Death To Men
I Rebuke This Process, Nimbus is Nephilim
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Re: Nimbus - Inhuman (The Nephilim)

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 6th, '09, 20:29

Are you saying you got this from a TR rapper? Cuz this has fingerprints of Anon
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Re: Nimbus - Inhuman (The Nephilim)

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 6th, '09, 20:31

Fa-Q wrote:Are you saying you got this from a TR rapper? Cuz this has fingerprints of Anon


I wrote everything except for the first two lines of my verse which were from someone Class mentioned, either Coleon or James R. ((I think)
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Re: Nimbus - Inhuman (The Nephilim)

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 6th, '09, 20:45

Ok thanks for clearing that up....dope to say the least....vocab is great multis are great....looks like we have another up and coming Rapper in TR....I love the chorus to....hit me up for a collab sometime
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Re: Nimbus - Inhuman (The Nephilim)

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 6th, '09, 20:48

Fa-Q wrote:Ok thanks for clearing that up....dope to say the least....vocab is great multis are great....looks like we have another up and coming Rapper in TR....I love the chorus to....hit me up for a collab sometime


thanks man, i'd be honored :y:
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Re: Nimbus - Inhuman (The Nephilim)

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 6th, '09, 20:57

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Re: Nimbus - Inhuman (The Nephilim)

Postby Requiem » Dec 6th, '09, 21:02

the chorus is seriously dope man, and the lyrics were pretty good... it's good to see new talent coming in :y:
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Re: Nimbus - Inhuman (The Nephilim)

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 6th, '09, 22:19

Requiem wrote:the chorus is seriously dope man, and the lyrics were pretty good... it's good to see new talent coming in :y:


thanks man :y: appreciate it
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Re: Nimbus - Inhuman (The Nephilim)

Postby Solace » Dec 7th, '09, 02:28

Liquid Courage Forge Liquid Swords Hit With The Force

is coleon btw
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Re: Nimbus - Inhuman (The Nephilim)

Postby gutawafang » Dec 7th, '09, 05:40

Yeah! I'm JIN KAZAMA!!! :worship: :worship: :worship:

Nice chorus, though it's kinda lame. :whistle: It's nice overall. :worship:
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Re: Nimbus - Inhuman (The Nephilim)

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 7th, '09, 08:01

Yeah I was gonna say that was coleon's song. Dope though homie. Nice to see ya comin up man.
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