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D.O.N. - Christmas Presents

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Re: D.O.N. - Christmas Presents

Postby classthe_king » Dec 6th, '09, 17:48

This was sick as always. Expecially this part
If D.O.N. of Finland still isn't the Baddest~In~The~Flesh~To~Rule... /
...how come more than just the Average~Of~The~Rest~Are~Through? //
My rep' as a punchlining rhyming Savage~Has~The~Vests~Approved... /
...I just pierce 'em leaving haters Damaged~To~The~Death~For~Boos //
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Re: D.O.N. - Christmas Presents

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 6th, '09, 22:33

wow man this was some nice stuff :y: you seem to have your style on lock so I'll just say it was grade A stuff

could you feed some of my stuff man? I'd appreciate it.
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Re: D.O.N. - Christmas Presents

Postby gutawafang » Dec 8th, '09, 05:41

crazy muhfucking multis. LOVED it man. :worship:

the jester is dope too. :y:
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Re: D.O.N. - Christmas Presents

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 8th, '09, 10:11

Yeah man like in the suicide min peice I really dig the separate people all flowing in one verse. It's really ill man I'm diggin the multis and punches. Keep comin up in here homie. Everyone watch out we gotta collab on the way. :y:
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Re: D.O.N. - Christmas Presents

Postby BILI » Dec 12th, '09, 15:29

That was awesome man,some dope multies in it,and it flowed great 2
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Re: D.O.N. - Christmas Presents

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 12th, '09, 20:00

Great multies, but I don't feel the structure that much, especially with all the unnecessary punctuation laced throughout the piece.

Overall good. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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