Insanity Bars.

[MC Anonymous]

Sneak through the night fire, creep in the back room
and clap soon, high wired, leaks in my gash ew
speaking to gardens of Eden, reaping a tattoo
on the side of my skull, rhyming with all my cats too
Lyrically alive, mortician of more ripping
of course spitting living in my vision, I'm gorge sipping
you pigeons are all slipping, depicting a false hearing
See me on the source spitting, splitting the wack writtens
a monstrous lyrical obelisk, a monument
with monumental proportional symmetric lyrical optics
I made these seconds, with eighty weapons to turn them to minutes
they wanna spit it, well spit it, rip it, I won't even listen
You stupid fisherman rookies hooky, looky, you're fucking awful
couldn't dig your style if I was looking for your fossils
Impossible to catch apostles who's aero like clothes
I'm an anti cupid with a fucking arrow to blow
leave your bone marrow apparel on shelves then I wear em
pair them with a bear coat, now I'm rocking like denim
pending lyrical entrance, three seconds to step in
charge your venom and end them, fill em with emblems of penning
lemonade pendants, your intestines are left in a mess and leaking
I'm a puerto rican excretion of lyrical beatings
barbarian heathen reaping, librarian, Alexandria
teacher, speaking to other weaklings who's weeping with feelings
Ever doubt my intentions, I shout with no questions
leave you with pounds of dissected hearts and sounds of the weapons
Scrape your rib cage out of your ancient chest plate
bring the best hate, leave ya ass cracked like ya cleft, aye
bother with breathing, I took ya lungs out and breath
only thing left, is your stomach, I'm so clumsy with meth
specifically, you will never be better then me, especially
because I got the energy to end my enemies

Lyrical corruption, bad bars to deceive you..

[Relapse.LP]

Fantastic rhyme scheme and multi-syllabic usage as usual.

But some rhymes seem forced.

Nevertheless, it was a great piece. Finally, another non-depressing verse.

[MC Anonymous]

Fantastic rhyme scheme and multi-syllabic usage as usual.

But some rhymes seem forced.

Nevertheless, it was a great piece. Finally, another non-depressing verse.

Haha thanks bro. However, the seemingly forced bars I've come to expect due to the fact that my pronunciation is different for certain lines.

[Requiem]

didn't like it bro
i love ur shit but i wasn't feeling this one... i couldn't tell a direction at all from the rhymes...

Sneak through the night fire, creep in the back room
and clap soon, high wired, leaks in my gash ew

don't know where ur going with it


u brought it back with

pair them with a bear coat, now I'm rocking like denim
pending lyrical entrance, three seconds to step in

that was a progressional line i understood it


other than that u have the most impressive vocab on tr handsdown, just make sure ur shit makes sense!!!

keep dropping bro

[gutawafang]

Fucking vocab.

[macdaddy019967]

goddddamn this is why ur my favorite

[Yah-hah]

Yeah man best vocab for sure. multies, insides, words I don't even understand lol. Naw man for real always comin with inteligent sickness man. (New song title for ya btw, I'll even collab lol) Rhymes schemes are always sick bro. Keep it up

[noel]

Ever doubt my intentions, I shout with no questions
leave you with pounds of dissected hearts and sounds of the weapons

That line stood out to me.

I like it when you focus more on the story telling aspect though.

I still can't believe you are only 15!!

Do you expand your vocabulary via dictionaries and thesaurus or google?

All the best man