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[Just Silver]

Designate and desecrate a desiccator designed
for resumes of dripping hate and implied wicked rhymes
forsaken for sakes ate with four saints for raising
a hell of satans masons to free this new duration
of writing with acid fighting fanatics whose plight is added
with a twist of wits wisp of spit and a slight sporadic
psyche will pass with a tight grasp of its bright flight jacket
that finally jumps sprints out of the cockpit and solves
gaps binding to hints about suckers who never shot calls
surrender these all white flags approach the fly cat
yo I dont buy that so go home and write half of a speech
addressed to my ass suspect a shiest to hold up a heist
unfolding the rights of life and a fusion of pain
some bolder to start up a topic and be losing their brain
cruising with plain janes going commando in a damn
pt. while she sucking my ammo right under my cargo cammo
the way the car goes they go gassed up to no end though
groupies love the dick yayo and the endo outside my payroll
lies a new sequin shining person whos reeking dying to curse
them.




Just a quick practice run
(while i was typing it seemed to make sense it still does but will be hard for some one who has no idea)

[Nimbus_9]

from what i could tell it looked like you rhymed and then made an idea out of it when the idea should inspire the rhyme, but from what i could tell you typed it fast and that was the intent, i like it, keep it up

P.S. Rocko is awesome

[Just Silver]

from what i could tell it looked like you rhymed and then made an idea out of it when the idea should inspire the rhyme, but from what i could tell you typed it fast and that was the intent, i like it, keep it up

P.S. Rocko is awesome

thanks.. and rocko is awesome

[Just Silver]

bump.

[Just Silver]

last bump

[Just Silver]

from what i could tell it looked like you rhymed and then made an idea out of it when the idea should inspire the rhyme, but from what i could tell you typed it fast and that was the intent, i like it, keep it up

P.S. Rocko is awesome

now that i think about it that is true. lol

but at the same time i had a vague idea for it and it came out being alright

[Relapse.LP]

Bump.

EDIT: Just kidding. Your multi-syllabic rhyming sounds almost natural now; that's great. And I enjoyed your perhaps intentional, perhaps not, use of alliteration in this first line. It just sounded plainly original and overall, fun to read.

Only main problem I have with the verse is the content. The majority of the bars makes sense, but as a entire consistent piece? It doesn't flow very well, to be perfectly honest. Sounded kinda like you were writing at the top of your head (if it's a keystyle, ignore this) and you jumped around various subjects a lot, so it was hard to understand as one piece.

But to sum it up, more-than-decent job.

[Just Silver]

Bump.

EDIT: Just kidding. Your multi-syllabic rhyming sounds almost natural now; that's great. And I enjoyed your perhaps intentional, perhaps not, use of alliteration in this first line. It just sounded plainly original and overall, fun to read.

Only main problem I have with the verse is the content. The majority of the bars makes sense, but as a entire consistent piece? It doesn't flow very well, to be perfectly honest. Sounded kinda like you were writing at the top of your head (if it's a keystyle, ignore this) and you jumped around various subjects a lot, so it was hard to understand as one piece.

But to sum it up, more-than-decent job.

thanks alot guy best feed ive had in a while and yes it was a keystyle
except i looked up some vocab before i dropped

[Relapse.LP]

Bump.

EDIT: Just kidding. Your multi-syllabic rhyming sounds almost natural now; that's great. And I enjoyed your perhaps intentional, perhaps not, use of alliteration in this first line. It just sounded plainly original and overall, fun to read.

Only main problem I have with the verse is the content. The majority of the bars makes sense, but as a entire consistent piece? It doesn't flow very well, to be perfectly honest. Sounded kinda like you were writing at the top of your head (if it's a keystyle, ignore this) and you jumped around various subjects a lot, so it was hard to understand as one piece.

But to sum it up, more-than-decent job.

thanks alot guy best feed ive had in a while and yes it was a keystyle
except i looked up some vocab before i dropped

Just like MC Anon.





Just kidding; I hope.

[Just Silver]

Bump.

EDIT: Just kidding. Your multi-syllabic rhyming sounds almost natural now; that's great. And I enjoyed your perhaps intentional, perhaps not, use of alliteration in this first line. It just sounded plainly original and overall, fun to read.

Only main problem I have with the verse is the content. The majority of the bars makes sense, but as a entire consistent piece? It doesn't flow very well, to be perfectly honest. Sounded kinda like you were writing at the top of your head (if it's a keystyle, ignore this) and you jumped around various subjects a lot, so it was hard to understand as one piece.

But to sum it up, more-than-decent job.

thanks alot guy best feed ive had in a while and yes it was a keystyle
except i looked up some vocab before i dropped

Just like MC Anon.





Just kidding; I hope.

what do u mean by that lol the only word i looked up was desiccator

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except i looked up some vocab before i dropped

what do u mean by that lol the only word i looked up was desiccator

It was just a joke; nothing memorable.

[Yah-hah]

Yeah man solid multies. Keystyle content is always gonna be iffy. I swear you bump almost as much as you write ahahahaah it's all good though bro keep at it

[gutawafang]

good vocab.

[Just Silver]

Yeah man solid multies. Keystyle content is always gonna be iffy. I swear you bump almost as much as you write ahahahaah it's all good though bro keep at it

lol i usually bump twice and then ill do a reply "bump"
like im doing now