to the remember me beat

[Edge]

leave u with more holes than a hookers stocking
more holes than 10 lesbians pussy locking
its the bed rocking, fagget mocking, always shocking
hip-hop king, more rings than boxing
call in a swat team, cause i leave them bodies rotting
cd never flopping, urs is never dropping
clock is quickly tocking, till ur heart is stopping

i am on the express to sucess
god bless those with less
crime scenes a mess
fuck more girls than Heff
whose next? thats anybodies guess
bullets burn through the flesh
lungs inhale the sess
shine like a rolex, roll like a royce
kill at choice, through my voice
call ya boys, its just worthless noise
roll with new toys, like every mornings christmas
when im gone ul miss this
till than u could diss this
bitches, do u know what this is?
my flow is potent dope
no1s sayin nope
cuz il burn u like a rope
my dick ya girlfriend gropped and dripped
and i just smoked and sipped
dope and crys- tal
animal about to growl
always on the prowl like a lion
i aint lying, mothers cryin, pastors sighin
dads denying i am in the fam
damn im a worthless man
but i got a plan to outsmoke amsterdam
i slam bodies to the floor
turnning hotties into whores
turnning parties into chores
i make rap belistic
u could suck my dick until the lipstick
wears off, u fucken dipshit

[Arrinef]

dope

[Edge]

dope

thanks man

[Nimbus_9]

punches in the beginning were okay, structure was good after that, needs more multies but keep it up man

[SajN]

It was alright.
The flow was a little shaky

The beginning reminded me of Eminem, I guess there's no surprise... after all this is an Eminem forum
It was not bad, but I'd like to see some longer lines, and better structure. Some more multies too.
It was a little simple.

Keep It Up.

[Edge]

It was alright.
The flow was a little shaky

The beginning reminded me of Eminem, I guess there's no surprise... after all this is an Eminem forum
It was not bad, but I'd like to see some longer lines, and better structure. Some more multies too.
It was a little simple.

Keep It Up.

alright thanks

[Yah-hah]

Short lines kinda made the flow weird until I listened to the beat and read so I got it. Yeah dude dope though man keep postin up in CW homie

[Edge]

Short lines kinda made the flow weird until I listened to the beat and read so I got it. Yeah dude dope though man keep postin up in CW homie

thanks man, iv been so busy with classes and work lol but im definently going to start writing more once classes end