Me, Lyrical? Nah, But I'll Try...

[Solace]

Been a longgg while since I tried writing like this.

Yo, I stay swift, Matrix, realistic lyrics, yours are looking painted,
You're full of fake shit, you practically took that page to waste it,
You suck, just face it, if you were amazing by now you'd be famous,
Your lyrics is the same shit as the dump I had taken..yesterday,
You fuck around with me, you'll obviously be the next to pay,
I just take this AK and let it spray, I'm a rebel, a dick, a renegade,
And the better way to solve this is my teeth, fuck some metal blades,
Reading that just got your head severed, eh? I'm ripping this,
Take off ya pants, no need for no homo...'Cause I just exposed ya clitoris,
Little bitch, you say that I'm wack? We'll see if you're fearing this,
When I cut up ya pussy until it looks like you had your period,
So do you remember me? No? Then Ill sever these eleven teens,
And staple they faces on ya forehead until it's stuck to ya memory.

[PlayWryte]

i'm feeling it, niice multies, like where you were going wit it, keep up

[Edge]

i like it

[DƎRDYPK]

Damn
that's some very dope MC'ing there Solace
my favorite part was

Little bitch, you say that I'm wack? We'll see if you're fearing this,
When I cut up ya pussy until it looks like you had your period,

idk why but it made me lol
good job bro
keep them crazy bars coming

[Relapse.LP]

Decent verse, but your vocabulary could be expanded as well as your complexity lyrically. Yes, you have multi-syllabic rhyming, but the words you use to rhyme sound too basic.

And it sounds like you're biting Slim Shady for several lines.

But overall, it was a nice verse.

[Noeezy]

Reading that just got your head severed, eh? I'm ripping this,
Take off ya pants, no need for no homo...'Cause I just exposed ya clitoris

hahaha nice shit

[Solace]

Thanks guys

@Chet Starr, I was going to write something personal but then I'm like Fuck that I do that too much so I tried just going back to a certain style I used a while back..Thanks again.

[bullet_boy46]

shit

[Solace]

Thanks i guess..