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Fuck You. (Warning to Someone)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 9th, '09, 03:04

A lethal motherfucker, crazy verbal author that
will drown a pregnant lady with her own water sack
relax or get smacked with a lyrical track
every single rhyme I say like a clip to the back
if you witness what I'm spitting, It's a miracle that
still alive in my grind, ripping minds and dats
I will kill anybody for a couple of grands
If you get in my way I will double my plans
lyrically I'm nothing but a bundle of rhymes
right? Everything I say, really nothing behind?
something to line, when I pen, and I'll do it again
because the bars that I spit like a prison within
I'm a sickness of sin, killing the bitches again
more weapons in my arms the armory kid
jump rope with umbilical cords, pitiful sores
of your screams and cries, poor whores galore, more
I need what I need, disease to be free
HIV with E, fucking hive in me
I'm pro pain, action and the flame
If you want to try and battle, better fracture my name
I'll capture your frame, like a picture, a mixture
to clip ya with motion like a movie, fix ya
I'm an antidote elixir, don't fix the fixture
miraculous metaphysical lyrical texture
above speculation, poetic audio undulation,
colder then condensation, and Pluto's rotation
who knows my face and, why the fuck do you wanna go take it?
hit ya face so fast, it's slow mo like the matrix
Spike balls? Why don't you volley your fists?
Santa Claus with ya sack acting jolly and shit
I'm a slut, yeah I said, cause I like it nice and rough
when I stick the chrome in then I ice it right through stuff
when I bust, I am hung, like William son
So if I ever shoot, all the idols fall with they lungs
you transparent like an orphan, fuck outta here
more bars then the shades when it's open like peers
blood soak in the years, my veins highways yo,
Like a fucking tidal wave, got a sideways flow
infinite eights, I got it when I shifted my shape
when I rhyme, I take over this planet like apes
say fuck you, put my finger right in your face
Every word that I say, miller light, how it taste
new school on the old school, a cruel fool
Punch Lauren on the head, knock out her bluetooth
A stoner of the dick, blowing weeds, thinking it's trees
falling in the quicksand, shrinking with knees
I do this with ease, couple lines aimed at the sleaze
If I really got at her, blow her brain with her teeth
Bust through ya wall like kool aid man, with plans
to make my sperm swim quicker then Olympian man
I'm sick with my plans, to rip your cranium too
So ill with the mic, never stadiums boo
flow never ceases to stop, my feces will drop,
on the face of the bitch, and her factual crops
I'll field goal kick a rhyme to grind her teeth
she giving brain so much that her mind will weep
legs open with a sign, saying give me some meat
crabs playing trick or treat, and it's sickening b,
her facebook has acne, run over like track meets
and throw her on a spike, so the TV Match, weeee
showing boobs to a dude, still couldn't make sense
she can smell what it's like, and it wouldn't be sent
Put the hoe in the garden, and kill her on sight
no morality for hoes, I am digging all night
body bag her body with a bag bigger then
all the albums he has sold, yeah that n.igga eminem
cause her body fucking huge, her vagina is torn
couldn't make a fucking living like grinding and porn
she Mexican and still couldn't package her meat
yet cracking her teeth, with vibrators, all she can speak
a weakling to me, I'll leave her seeping in pee
she even sleeps in a sexual position, believe
put a coin in her crack, and she moves up and down
move her cup around, Starbucks she wants, what a clown
Come with more heat then Pacific Ocean
You wanna talk shit, well I'll rip you open...
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Fuck You. (Warning to Someone)

Postby gutawafang » Dec 9th, '09, 03:11

Crazy wordplay and nameplay throughout. Straight and direct diss to that person. :worship:

Consistent fire. :worship:
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Re: Fuck You. (Warning to Someone)

Postby Arrinef » Dec 9th, '09, 03:15

damn, that shit went hard.
props where its due.
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Re: Fuck You. (Warning to Someone)

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 9th, '09, 03:24

Who for? But dope no how man.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fuck You. (Warning to Someone)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 9th, '09, 03:25

Nobody on TR, don't worry.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Fuck You. (Warning to Someone)

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 9th, '09, 03:27

Oh ok that's cool. Is it some chick from like school?
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fuck You. (Warning to Someone)

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 9th, '09, 03:34

MC Anonymous wrote:Nobody on TR, don't worry.

Hmmm judging by the title...sounds like it is
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Re: Fuck You. (Warning to Someone)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 9th, '09, 03:40

Yah-hah wrote:Oh ok that's cool. Is it some chick from like school?

Yeah, a chick named Lauren fucking with someone close to me. :angry:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Fuck You. (Warning to Someone)

Postby Emadyville » Dec 9th, '09, 04:27

The flow seemed a little messy to me when I was reading, especially with the rhymes and multi-syllable words you use, some of it was fire and some of it was just alright, I think after halfway through it became too boring with the structure. The ending lines were dope, and the bars I spit like a prison within was dope as fuck too. Overall this was great, I just like to give you ya know some real feedback homes :y:
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Re: Fuck You. (Warning to Someone)

Postby Solace » Dec 9th, '09, 04:31

MC Anonymous wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:Oh ok that's cool. Is it some chick from like school?

Yeah, a chick named Lauren fucking with someone close to me. :angry:



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