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Nimbus - The Heart's Decay

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 9th, '09, 02:52

lil something I wrote at school out of inspiration :y:

Collab with aborted babies, rap over heart beats
spark heat at angels, rap with Satan to start beef

ya bars peak, climax, mine will forever ascend
forever a sin to let all my competitors live

the nephilim's wit eclipses religion and faith
syllable snake, sippin' venom from the tip of a blade

skinning your mates, flow an Apache death stroke
Mohawk in hand, scalp a man when I says so

scripts jam with the pencil, outlandishly mental
God depicted man, he used my rant as the stencil
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Re: Nimbus - The Heart's Decay

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 9th, '09, 03:10

Nimbus_9 wrote:lil something I wrote at school out of inspiration :y:

Collab with aborted babies, rap over heart beats
spark heat at angels, rap with Satan to start beef

ya bars peak, climax, mine will forever ascend
forever a sin to let all my competitors live

the nephilim's wit eclipses religion and faith
syllable snake, sippin' venom from the tip of a blade

skinning your mates, flow an Apache death stroke
Mohawk in hand, scalp a man when I says so

scripts jam with the pencil, outlandishly mental
God depicted man, he used my rant as the stencil

:y: :y: :y: :y: A lil simplistic but you're getting better :worship:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Nimbus - The Heart's Decay

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 9th, '09, 03:14

MC Anonymous wrote:
Nimbus_9 wrote:lil something I wrote at school out of inspiration :y:

Collab with aborted babies, rap over heart beats
spark heat at angels, rap with Satan to start beef

ya bars peak, climax, mine will forever ascend
forever a sin to let all my competitors live

the nephilim's wit eclipses religion and faith
syllable snake, sippin' venom from the tip of a blade

skinning your mates, flow an Apache death stroke
Mohawk in hand, scalp a man when I says so

scripts jam with the pencil, outlandishly mental
God depicted man, he used my rant as the stencil

:y: :y: :y: :y: A lil simplistic but you're getting better :worship:


thanks a ton man, I kinda shelved our collab but I'll try and get to it this week, writing isn't a big part of my day so I'm kinda sporadic

thanks for feeding man
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Re: Nimbus - The Heart's Decay

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 9th, '09, 03:36

Yo man dope and simple I dig it. First two lines are dope and the Native line hell yeah I see ya lol. PM me some time we should collab man
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Nimbus - The Heart's Decay

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 9th, '09, 05:22

Yah-hah wrote:Yo man dope and simple I dig it. First two lines are dope and the Native line hell yeah I see ya lol. PM me some time we should collab man


lol thanks, and no doubt

like I said to Anon idk when I'll get to it but it will be done
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