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Hell's Imagery

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Hell's Imagery

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 9th, '09, 23:49

Liquor and darkness litters, with pitchers
and bark less sisters wither, all this slithers in pictures
lost in fixtures, the mixture of heartless critters
causes sicker, thoughts in my thoughtless center
I fought a member, of devils on another level with treble
so remember the trouble, listen and witness the struggle
remember back in several days, I came, and hit a couple babes
and paid, and stayed the same, my brain decayed in ways to shame
it's difficult to swallow, you wallow, tomorrow is nothing
so you borrow a substance, hallow abundance and love it
entities that never existed and then you worship
on bended knees, and then you see that's it's nothing but serpents
Your purpose is to kiss it, live it, be it and seep it
keep it secret, and never let anybody else peep it
like your girlfriend, and then a whirlwind, of hurling
goes to your stomach and you start surfing
The symphony and harmony and armory is certain
I sent you these to honor me and guardian ya purpose
your meant to be so slaughtering and prosperous, my servant
an entity that's offering sarcophagus of verses
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Hell's Imagery

Postby DƎRDYPK » Dec 9th, '09, 23:53

:worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:
you already know I love these "darker" pieces you write bro :y:
I can't wait to read some more :smoking:

or hear some new Anonymous audio :shifty:

keep up the good work :flower:
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Re: Hell's Imagery

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 10th, '09, 01:51

Yeah I always dig the darker peices. This one is dope. mad vocab as usual homie. good shit man. Check out the Native pride :D
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Hell's Imagery

Postby macdaddy019967 » Dec 10th, '09, 01:53

that was fucken hard good shit man :smoking:
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#JMG #SacJB #ToxicBuffy #Trinell #Meadows_Killas
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Re: Hell's Imagery

Postby Solace » Dec 10th, '09, 04:12

That was great. I loved the multies and flow...Not was it just random, but it was really descriptive. Helped show the explicity.
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Re: Hell's Imagery

Postby Emadyville » Dec 10th, '09, 05:22

The last 4 bars stood out like a sore thumb man but in a good way haha, very good :y:
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