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Postby macdaddy019967 » Dec 10th, '09, 20:46

I wanna know Who Is-Real and who is synthetic/
If you IsRael, then I guess I'm an anti-semetic/
somebody call a medic, I eat flesh like a cannibal's pleasure/
Tormented in hell/ sharing a cell with Hannibal Lector/
Now dig this understandable lecture/
like an animal's mandible sector/
I feel sorry for your mind's psychology
but you gets no apology and that's my policy/
I studied anthropology
and have the pros at CSI tryin to follow me/
my protocols are off the wall/
Above the law, above Allah, above all of yall/
I send my enemies to the Lord, then read the Holy Quran/
their brains send messages to the spinal cord
...
no response/
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Re: Science

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 10th, '09, 20:52

Wooo, that was some dope shit. Ending was amazing...orgasmic, lol.
Awesome shit man, flow, lyrics, content, everything was top-notch!

Keep it up dude!
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Re: Science

Postby macdaddy019967 » Dec 10th, '09, 21:00

Steve Spag wrote:Wooo, that was some dope shit. Ending was amazing...orgasmic, lol.
Awesome shit man, flow, lyrics, content, everything was top-notch!

Keep it up dude!
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wow thanks man!
i appreciate the feedback :worship:
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Re: Science

Postby Spyder » Dec 10th, '09, 21:00

seeing some Anonymous touch :whistle:
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Re: Science

Postby macdaddy019967 » Dec 10th, '09, 21:05

Spyder wrote:seeing some Anonymous touch :whistle:

haha can't wait to see what anonymous has to say about that
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Re: Science

Postby Spyder » Dec 10th, '09, 21:06

macdaddy019967 wrote:
Spyder wrote:seeing some Anonymous touch :whistle:

haha can't wait to see what anonymous has to say about that


:unsure: why
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Re: Science

Postby macdaddy019967 » Dec 10th, '09, 21:08

Spyder wrote:
macdaddy019967 wrote:
Spyder wrote:seeing some Anonymous touch :whistle:

haha can't wait to see what anonymous has to say about that


:unsure: why

he told me last time that i was copying his style but it seems i can't stop myself from doing so...im not doing it intentionally either
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Re: Science

Postby Spyder » Dec 10th, '09, 21:10

:laughing: its alright dude, im assuming he's helped you?
if so you need to take what he's taught and adapt it to your own style
your own emotion and what not, thats what i did cause he thought i took his style too
so i changed it up and consider myself my own writer/style... i hope lol
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Postby macdaddy019967 » Dec 10th, '09, 21:13

Spyder wrote::laughing: its alright dude, im assuming he's helped you?
if so you need to take what he's taught and adapt it to your own style
your own emotion and what not, thats what i did cause he thought i took his style too
so i changed it up and consider myself my own writer/style... i hope lol

no he didn't help me lol
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Re: Science

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 10th, '09, 21:18

This time he didn't bite my style, it was a good piece though. :worship:
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Re: Science

Postby Spyder » Dec 10th, '09, 23:09

word :y:
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Re: Science

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 11th, '09, 04:16

good stuff man :y:
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Re: Science

Postby macdaddy019967 » Dec 11th, '09, 08:27

thanks for all the feedback guys I appreciate it 100 percent :worship:
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Re: Science

Postby Arrinef » Dec 11th, '09, 08:38

fucking dope as fuck
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