19 bars

[Edge]

like a fire in the summer out in cali, im a blaze
u always drop the blunt, im mariano with the saves
smokin on the kush, sour deisel and haze
the amount of bud in my blunts, lastin me for days
got me in a daze, im goin crazed, wonderin if this faze
of highness got the whole room movin in the waves
the blunt just went out, so hurry up and light it
im so high, im up with them stunt pilots
if u need some bud, take my number, dial it
if ur gunna rat me out, i find that shit just childish
than imma act wildish, and u dont wanna c that
cuz than ul see traps, gats, macks, and bats
i pave ways in all ways like sun rays
blades leads to graves, when drugs r my slaves
i do u like slim shady did to Dave Mays
tear u in 8 ways, dismatle ya body
i got my sawblade, i dont need the shottie
keep fuckin with me, i tear ya body to peices
send it to ya mother, brothers and ur neices

[Nimbus_9]

not a good style man, seems a bit rookie, find yourself as an artist, good luck in the future

[Edge]

not a good style man, seems a bit rookie, find yourself as an artist, good luck in the future

thanks for feedback
have u read any of my other shit or nah?

[Yah-hah]

Lyrically it was ok. Not special but wasnt aweful. he flow was good though pretty on point there. Just keep writing and work on the lyrics. I feel like in your other songs plus this one its like you got the flow you want just gotta find words to put in that flow. Keep working though homie

[D'Leh]

nothing special, an ok drop, keep it coming man...oh the flow was great!!

[Edge]

thanks guys, appreciate the feedback