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Horrorcore feat. Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 10th, '09, 21:22

Its really his song so its featuring me but that be kinda awkward if I posted something by me and I was a feature...uhm enjoy



(Yahhah)
I'm raging inside so cannibalistic both handled like mystics,
Just waiting to find those animal misfits that hannibal twisted,
I landed it this quick, two left jabs and and slit both of your down south wrists,
Loud mouth bitch, bow down quick or get hit with a roundhouse kick,
I'm swingin my chainsaw until your brain's raw,
Slippin my fingers around your neck until all of your veins pop,
Please sir please change the topic, Like the police we came to stop it,
So no matter how much you shake the 8 ball you can't change the top spin,
I'm droppin ya casket then walkin right past it,
Stop talkin your trash it's often the action that results in your passin,
My passion? Stickin this needle in my veins,
Shoot up some people in the rain and they keep doin the same,
I keep shootin my brain, here take this gun and use it to take your life away,
End you life today and try to save your heart put it in the microwave,



It's horrorcore,
What you screamin in horror for?
Comin down the corridor with 4 or more rags of cloraphorme,
Bored of war? Then what the fuck did I come over for?



(Fa-Q)
As I'm descending heavens, I see bending sevens,
They're turning into loose sixes, crossing each other, into burning crucifixes,
I wear all black, including black gloves,
Her pail skin makes it look like my hands, attack doves,
She screams in pain, and this is what I want,
I dream in my brain, her skin cuts the blunt,
But I know the machete will cut this never ready slut,
Sew her pussy closed, even though it was already shut,
I just want to dance with a chainsaw,
The girl is topless, no pants, in a plain bra,
I wait for her in her apartment, in a closet with her teddy bear,
I creep in the bathroom, look in the mirror, she's already there,
I have a look of evil, that would even make Freddy scared,
She's steady to prepare, to paint her face,
Locked the doors, and make sure there aint a trace,
Her dead body for days will linger the stench,
I want her to scream with those vocal chords, she's been a singer since,
Childhood, now her voice box has traces of my finger prints,



It's horrorcore,
What you screamin in horror for?
Comin down the corridor with 4 or more rags of cloraphorme,
Bored of war? Then what the fuck did I come over for?



(Fa-Q)
Who am I? I'm the one outside your tent,
Where are you? I doubt hiding in the vent,
Will save you from my muddy wrath,
You wanted to dye your hair red bitch,
Enjoy your blood bath,
Can't escape through the roads, the rains flood the path,
Slut race off, nope, your all my souls,
Cut your face off, I hope they fit my eyeholes,
I know I have rotting flesh on me, I don't mean to smell,
Go ahead scream and yell, before you steam in hell,
Nighty nighty cunt, I hope you dream well,
(Yahhah)
Raging inside, World's spinning so fast my feet are scraping the sky,
Quick to stick the bitch with the baby inside,
Screaming I'm both crazy and high, I'm fucking waiting to die,
Saving my byes till this baseball bat hits, and makes my cranium fly,
So I'm waving goodbye as your hits increase my cranium level,
With my scissors circumcisizing a tazmanian devil,
Just straining to settle the score with this hacksaw,
I attack yall with my cracked saw till your back's raw,
With 10 gallons of syanide quick cover your set mouth,
Time is just flyin bye so you can't let the breath out,
This isn't a test now your the only one left out,
Just remember to leave your key at the door whenever you check out,



It's horrorcore,
What you screamin in horror for?
Comin down the corridor with 4 or more rags of cloraphorme,
Bored of war? Then what the fuck did I come over for?
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Re: Horrorcore feat. Yahhah

Postby Just Silver » Dec 10th, '09, 22:51

Liked each verse thoroughly and vocab and rhyme set up was on point

hook was great (usually the most criticized for collabs)

overall 9/10
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Re: Horrorcore feat. Yahhah

Postby Wic Kid » Dec 10th, '09, 22:56

:y: :y: :y: This was amazing. I always liked this horror shit. Both of your verses were great (Yah's was little better, sorry Fa-q :'( ). The third verse was also good. Flow was pretty tight, multies were :worship: . But the chorus was the peak of this song. :y:
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Re: Horrorcore feat. Yahhah

Postby BILI » Dec 10th, '09, 23:01

Dudes its aweome, :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: ,both of you did dope job,nice rhymes :y: :y: ,Yah`s verse was a bit better then Fa-Q`s but he did dope as well,only the hook aint that good(couda been better
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Re: Horrorcore feat. Yahhah

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 11th, '09, 04:07

for me it didn't really it the mark for horror core (such as Rhyme Asylum, Circle Of Tyrants, or Gravediggaz) but it was still very entertaining

I think you guys make a great pair, good job :y:
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Re: Horrorcore feat. Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 11th, '09, 04:31

Thanks BILI, Wic, Silver, and Nimbus
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Re: Horrorcore feat. Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 11th, '09, 08:29

Damn Jus, your verses are pretty sick
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Re: Horrorcore feat. Yahhah

Postby macdaddy019967 » Dec 11th, '09, 08:33

So I'm waving goodbye as your hits increase my cranium level,
With my scissors circumcisizing a tazmanian devil,

that made me laugh but it was fucken sick
overall shit is pretty dope except chorus is not that catchy as one said earlier but good shit :y:
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Re: Horrorcore feat. Yahhah

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 11th, '09, 15:13

Ha thanks mac. Yeah had a different chours but Fa-Q thought a different part would be better. I liked this one more though. Thanks for the love yall
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Horrorcore feat. Yahhah

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Dec 11th, '09, 16:38

I love it! You guys should callob more often...
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

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Re: Horrorcore feat. Yahhah

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 11th, '09, 17:14

eminemgirl1234 wrote:I love it! You guys should callob more often...


We collab all the time. Think it's like about 10 songs or so lol thanks ma
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Horrorcore feat. Yahhah

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Dec 11th, '09, 17:14

Yah-hah wrote:
eminemgirl1234 wrote:I love it! You guys should callob more often...


We collab all the time. Think it's like about 10 songs or so lol thanks ma


Your Welcome, Baby boy!
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

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Re: Horrorcore feat. Yahhah

Postby D'Leh » Dec 11th, '09, 17:31

OMG, you guys spit fire everytime together, loved the flow, and the wordplay, great job!!!
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Horrorcore feat. Yahhah

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 11th, '09, 17:54

Thanks homie :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Horrorcore feat. Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 11th, '09, 19:49

Thanks Macdaddy and Emsgirl
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