Ruthless - Who Was That

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Chorus:
click clack, boom tak, who was that,
click clack, boom tak, who was that,
click clack, boom tak, who was that,
its ruthless, and hes comming in from the back,

Verse 1:
man im so silent when im on my mission,
you mess with me, i will beat you into submition,
because that means you would ruien my mission,
and i cant have it, to fail my mission,
man you think your so mutha fucking good,
but when i comeing at you, your act all hollywood,
you got your mutha fucken bownces all over you,
your fucking securyty guards are fucking you all over,
if i ever get mutha fucking famuse,
im just gonna have myself, im never gonna be shameless,
i will, walk down into the mutha fucking public,
even if i have to sign autographs, so be it,
im not a fucking pussy, im not a millionare,
so this is my last threat, mutha fucka beware,
coz i dont wanna tell you twice,
coz i will slice and dice you like you like you was appleslice,

Verse 2:
man your like a fucking pest, you never go,
when the fuck will you ever run out of ammo,
coz im getting sick and tired of these mind games,
you keep going you gonna ignite these angry flames,
its just amazing how you never fucking stop,
but theres gonna be one day that you gonna flop,
and im gonna be there, in the front fucking row,
and then im gonna leave in my freshly brawght canaro,
coz im gonna overtake your fucking fame,
and im gonna be running with a sniper, trying to erase your name,
and your nickname, and your real name, and your surname, man your so fucking lame,
you should just evacuate the world,
or at least, spend your remander time at dream-world,
coz we dont want your around her no more,
you step in the door, you will detinate that claymore,

There you go, a track i finished writting, i mite record it, im not sure yet. If i do it mite go on my EP "The Evil Christmas EP" dropping on christmas day

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[Fa-Q]

It was ok...chorus was simple and dumb, fix the spelling errors but the verse has potential

[Nimbus_9]

It was ok...chorus was simple and dumb, fix the spelling errors but the verse has potential

agreed^ it just seems a bit rookie, keep at it

[Yah-hah]

^^Yeah gotta agree with them man. Can be real dope if ya just keep at it